This Plug-in is Too Middle School

I deleted a few posts today that are... more violent...

Friends who have read the book circle should know that as long as the words are not too excessive, I basically don't care about the posts.

The feedback from the book friend circle is actually very important for newcomers. There are some questions that I can't feel when I write day by day, but it is easier for book friends who read it together.

Because it was the first time I wrote a long novel, the rhythm control was not good enough, and the plot was laid out, which led to a delay in the beginning, including problems such as the rapid change of characters, and the lack of clear explanation of some backgrounds and settings, etc.

These are all derived from everyone's feedback, which has helped me a lot. In the previous chapters, I will modify some details without affecting the plot. The faults that can be noticed are also carefully controlled. I am actually very interested in giving opinions. welcome.

Mainly... some posts are really not very friendly.

If you feel uncomfortable in a certain place, you are expressing your feelings.

To point out the problem in some places is to make an opinion.

But adjectives such as garbage, sow, disgusting, and highly poisonous, as well as the powerful rhetorical questions throughout, are really frustrating. They are venting their emotions rather than preparing for communication...

I especially welcome the first two, and the third one will write down the "core idea", and then clean up part of it depending on the level of the words. The main reason is that even if the problem is also pointed out, the speech full of negative emotions will still make people panic...

I also asked the third type of friends to distinguish between expressing feelings, giving opinions, and venting emotions, and took a few seconds to think about the words and sentence patterns.

After all, there are some things that are really unnecessary. Moreover, I am definitely the person who hopes that this book can be written well. As long as it is a reasonable opinion and suggestion, I will seriously consider it, but it may not be the best due to the limitation of my ability. I hope to bear with you.

Originally, I didn’t want to open a single chapter on this matter, but it was too long to write this chapter, and it is not yet on the shelves, so let’s just say a few more words, sorry it’s not an extra update, and I won’t open a single chapter in the future. Talking about this issue, just sauce, I still look forward to your feedback in the future~