Twin Cities: Hero Witness System

First of all, I have to admit that there are a lot of places where I can't write well enough.

For example, the war scene was written as a child's play, and the content of the battle was scribbled in a few strokes without writing a feeling of excitement. Another example is because it is a single dog, the emotional scenes written are easy to embarrass the old oilers.

But my latest chapters aren't perfunctory.

Some book friends pointed out that Sarah and Illaoi's characters are very poor, and there are problems that they can't stand.

I have to say that before writing each character, I will review the character's story many times and check out a lot of relevant information.

Some book friends once said that my supporting roles are well established, and that supporting roles are not only for the protagonist, they have distinct personalities and can be recognized.

That's because I relied on the original background setting, and then combined with the direction of the book to carry out the second creation. .

Such as Silko, such as Orianna, such as Jace and so on.

In the first few chapters, the reason why Sarah treated Lin Wen rudely, even though she was a weak person, made a request because she couldn't have face in Bilgewater, and she had to be cunning and shameless in doing things. It was precisely because it was seen in the tavern that Lin Wen was a "good man" and it was confirmed by Graves that Sarah made some unreasonable demands to Lin Wen many times.

Everyone, Sarah is essentially a pirate. Whether it's in the story of dead water or the story of sinking into the dead, Sarah's character design is very "weird". She can be very kind, but at the same time she can also Strangers attacked violently, such as arresting the brothers of so-and-so, and after agreeing to pay the ransom, they released the brother of the other party, and only grabbed the other party to exchange money.

But in the end, Sarah was able to temporarily change her mind and kill both of them, just because the other party worked for Planck, but who in Bilgewater would dare not work for Planck?

She can easily destroy a person who has no hatred with him, she is not a good girl...

So how could Sarah like this be able to be quiet when facing someone who can make demands? If you want to wait quietly for others to give orders, is Sarah still a female pirate?

Well, I have finished explaining this. I know that I will not be able to convince many people, but I don't want to talk about this issue anymore.

Next is another book friend's question.

It was the matter of why Lin Wen wasn't ready to meet Illaoi when he went to Bilgewater, and why he had to wait until the end.

Some book friends think that since Lin Wen is going to Bilgewater, he has to think about it in advance, because he knows the backstory, so he should know that when he goes to Bilgewater, he will meet Illaoi.

But it is because Lin Wen knows the backstory that I have repeatedly emphasized in the book that Lin Wen does not want to meet Soul Eater, not because Soul Eater is difficult to handle, but because once there is Soul Eater, it will definitely There is Illaoi.

The reasons are as follows:

1: Baru and Bilgewater are not as close as everyone thinks they are. There is no connection between Baru and Bilgewater, in fact Baru hates Bilgewater very much. Only Illaoi is an outlier. She will help the Bilgewater people during Soul Eater Night, and she even volunteers to go to Bilgewater later, but Illaoi is the only one.

2: Bilgewater worships Baru culture, because the island was born on the land where Baru was once abandoned. And the so-called tithing, throwing a dollar into the sea before sailing, it must have a belief bonus, but I personally think there is also a reason for fear.

3: The Baru repelled the Night of Soul Eater, not to protect Bilgewater, but because Nagakaporos was a real god. Nagakaporos was tainted by the presence of those ghosts in Eater of Souls, which Illaoi described in his personal short story. Except for Illaoi, the Baru people don't care about the life and death of the Bidao people, so it is not advisable to say that the Baru people are the high-ranking people of Bidao.

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As above, everyone can understand why Lin Wen hesitated and felt helpless when he saw Illaoi.

Because without Plank, Illaoi would have played, but he wouldn't have fought.

This is also the reason why Lin Wen stood there dumbfounded to watch the play when he heard Sarah calling someone to find Illaoi.

That's why I wrote a chapter to highlight the relationship between Illaoi and Planck...

It is precisely because of the feud between Planck and Sarah Graves that Illaoi, who values ​​Planck, is involved in this matter.

I want to write a story about saving the scene, and let Lin Wen make the final shot.

But more than that, I was afraid that I would save Sarah as soon as I went up, and I would be told that I would not be able to walk when I saw a woman.

Sarah is important to Lin Wen, but her importance lies in adding attributes to Lin Wen, and helping the Shuangcheng take care of Bi Dao (again, the Baru people don't care about Bilgewater), but she can take care of Bi Dao. It's not just Sarah who is on the island, so can Graves, so can Drizzt.

Lin Wen has been in contact with her for a very short period of time, neither relatives nor friends, so Lin Wen did not directly take action. What I want to write is that Lin Wen is considering whether it is worth it to offend Illaoi for Sarah. When this thing (again, I didn't write the question well.)

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Actually, I don't like to post this kind of explanation very much, but I should have posted this book three times by now, almost once a month. The first time is to emphasize that the relationship between Jess and Lin Wen is not a male keto (I really am not Male keto, I'm just playing with golden wheel terriers). This broken stalk is still persuading some book friends, and even when there is a big recommendation, it has caused many people to criticize me in book reviews.

The second time was the time between Sion and Lin Wen. The war scenes were written too scribbly. Lin Wen was extremely difficult to beat a hundred rune soldiers (they were super soldiers)

The third time is this time, to emphasize the direction of the story and the problem of character design.

The reason I don't like it is that whenever I emphasize these problems, it means that there is a problem with my writing.

I didn't post this to explain it, as if it wasn't my fault, in fact it was my fault, my writing wasn't good enough.

The foreshadowing is long but not careful enough, and if you want to push the climax, you can't push it up.

If you can read it up to now, I have read about the inadequacies of telling stories under the title of disciple and apprentice, and I also attach great importance to your speeches.

The results of this book are very good, and it is very good for me. Its current results are far beyond my imagination, so I am very grateful to the book friends who have been accompanying me.

I hope some of my explanations can make book friends understand my thoughts, UU reading www. uukanshu.com understands why I wrote this.

Malicious disgusting readers? How is that possible? You are now my food and clothing parents.

During the epidemic, I was waiting to die at home, relying on the income of writing books to support myself.

It's also because I paid too much attention to it, and I didn't sleep all night, so I wrote these things.

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I started writing this testimonial at 4:30 since I read the comments scattered at one point, and now it is 5:47 in the morning.

The nonsense has been said in two thousand words, and I think that this time is enough for me to write two chapters.

Ah, with such a nonsense and incompetent author on the stall, you are really in trouble.

Well, so be it.

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Stop for a few more days.

Feel sorry.