Story of Longevity

"...How could this happen! Is this kind of plot feeding durians to readers? I can't believe that there is such an author!"

Seeing the end, Tong Nao angrily threw the book on the table.

"Well, Xiaotong Tong, even if this is the case, the story is quite interesting, isn't it?

Is the final result also not very good? "

Although the ending was also a bit unexpected by Saori, Saori is a rationalist after all.

"But! The protagonist of this third volume, this uncle named Britz, I can't understand what he is doing!"

Saori's persuasion has little effect on the impatient Kirino~www.ltnovel.com~ When she is full of anger, she doesn't vomit now:

"This guy, it's fine to kill such a cute blonde loli daughter in the beginning, but then?

While saying [Try to look forward to this world again, how about? 】Such beautiful words, while actively looking for the evil **** to perform the resurrection ceremony.

After meeting Altaïr and the others, he obviously relied on Altaïr's power to regain his daughter from the evil god, but he turned his head and betrayed Altaïr and the others for the world...

I have been paddling during the battle, and the position is not clear at all...Ah, trouble, anyway, I hate this guy! "

"Well, it's a popular idea. There are many people who think like you in online forums and post bars."

Wugeng Liuli said that it was not incomprehensible to Tong Nai's unhappiness.

"It's nothing more than expressing incomprehension and feeling uncomfortable about the role setting and behavior of Britz."

"Let's just say it! This author named [Star Moment] is definitely looking for faults on purpose?!"

"However, in addition to the criticism of this character on the Internet, there are also criticisms that are equivalent to the criticism, and there are voices that vindicates this character.

As an important person in the third volume, without Britz, if he hadn't killed his daughter with his own hands, Cthulhu would have fallen a few years ago without knowing nothing about human forces, and the world itself might have already gone to extinction.

After that, Britz was able to struggle for several years in a world of regret and hopelessness, persistently finding a way to resurrect his daughter, dealing with the evil god, and making deals.

Even the ambition to die...

In the end, he succeeded, but because of this he met Altaïr and the others, and owed favor.

Later, when Britz knew that as long as Altaïr and the others existed, they would become the cause of the world's destruction again.

Do you think that Britz, who has regained his daughter and ignited hope in his life, will guard this hope by all means?

Or will he just watch his daughter who has finally survived come to an end with this world? "

After the long description, Wu Geng Liuli drank a sip of tea to moisturize his throat.

In terms of novels, she actually pays more attention to the understanding of the plot than a rationalist like Saori.

But the Tongno she is facing now is a completely emotional person:

"Huh!-This kind of worldview setting, there is no way to change this, so let's not talk about it.

But anyway, I just don’t like Britz. Alina is obviously so cute and gentle. He, a father, has no gentle shadow at all. Is he really a biological father and daughter?

Really..."

After speaking, Tong Nai turned his head in annoyance, with a stubborn look.

Seeing her like this, Wu Geng Liuli was also a little reluctant.

"But there is no way, Britz's worldview does not allow him to be gentle with people other than his daughter.

Instead, should we praise him for his perseverance in this unreasonable destiny to the end? "

"Oh, black, that means you actually like this character?"

Tong Nai understands that Wugeng Liuli should be the legendary "xxx push", which is simply a reader who has a particularly strong sense of identification with a certain character.

Wugeng Liuli also graciously fluttered her long hair and admitted it.

"Well, I have to admit that there were periods when I couldn't understand what Britz did, but if I read it a few more times, I will soon understand that Britz's approach is what an adult should have.

This may be the difference between adults and...children? "

"Hey! Do you mean I am a child?"

Seeing Wugeng Liuli's provocative expression, Tong Nai immediately hurried away, but this black Gothic Lolita's provocation was unbearable for her at all.

"Where? It's just for you to grow up well?"

"It's all the same, doesn't it?!"

"Well, please calm down the two of you. The topics are off the beaten track. Isn't our purpose today to appreciate the novel "Altaïr"?"

At the right time, Saori, the peacemaker, entered the battlefield.

"I thought that, regardless of what Britz Turka is like, but because of his existence, the worldview of the third volume has been well displayed, and the story has become interesting, right?

Moreover, for better or worse, the character of Britz is very plump and true, and that's why it caused a topic on the Internet, isn't it? "

"Yes, as Saori said, even if it is a villain or a villain, a charismatic character can always penetrate the reader's heart."

Five watch Liuli thoughtfully.

"Well... it's true... Cut, although I hate him, but I remember the existence of this character, even if it wasn't my intention."

Tong Na also admitted it proudly.

"Hmph, that's it. I thought [Star Moment] the author's purpose was here. This book was written with the help of [character shaping]!"

"You say that, it's not that you don't feel that way..."

Seeing Saori looking at herself, specially reminded, Wugeng Liuli was a little surprised.

"The Divine Comedy-Altaïr" now has three volumes, and each volume has a new worldview, and if there is no surprise, this mode of infinite worldview will continue in the future, right?"

"That's it, this is where the author is amazing, as if one thousand and one nights, one thousand and one stories...

Many authors have imitated this new writing mode. In theory, isn't it possible to write unlimitedly? "

"Hei Maoshi is right~www.ltnovel.com~Many fantasy novels are made of characters' adventures to create a complete worldview.

But in this novel, every view of its world is like...in order to highlight the image of a certain character deliberately set to that feeling.

There is no superfluous part, which is very impressive.

Well... this is just a little bit of intuition. Don't care about the black cat. "

The black cat shook his head.

"There is no such thing, Saori.

You mean, I should combine the worldview with the characterization...Does that mean? "

"That's it, whether it is based on the world view or characterization, as long as the story becomes interesting.

Settings that have nothing to do with the story or the characters can actually be omitted temporarily, as long as they are logical, few people will care. "

Then Tong Na also answered:

"In other words, your super thick set of settings can already be thrown away. That's how it is, understand?"

"No, no, no, it's just the author who reads it alone, or it can be sold as a peripheral in the future, no need to throw it away."

I was afraid that facing Tong Na's provocative suggestion, he would quarrel with Wugeng Liuli again. Saori quickly added.

"What? Read one book and compare another book, or must you read the original novel?

This kind of fan story is a bit too much, right? "

"...In short, my set amount is still too much, right?"

Wugeng Liuli understood that Saori was euphemistically pointing out the shortcomings in her work.

Unlike the rude and rude frankness of a certain tea law woman, Saori has always been euphemistic...

In other words, this is the real friend, right?