Stay away from Conan

Chapter 743 Reconstructing the Script

Listening to Mitsuhiko's natural answer, Gao Yuan didn't know what expression to use in response -

As the author of this script, I also have to perform the "Masked Superman" with two emotionally entangled protagonists...

And naturally, as the script that the Young Detective Team is going to perform, the two female actors in the script are naturally Xiao Ai and Bumi...

For this reason, Gao Yuan can't help but think of the troubles Mitsuhiko once told Xiaolan in the original theatrical version, "Countdown to Heaven", but comparing it to now, Gao Yuan is not sure whether Mitsuhiko had the same thoughts when he wrote this script. Similar little thoughts are...

But at least, no matter what the reason is, Gao Yuan still has to think about changing the script as much as possible——

After all, no matter what, it can be said that this is a plot based on reality, and it is always a bit of a drama for yourself.

And on the other hand, the script itself is too difficult to perform!

"Huh? The show you are going to perform is a script written by Mitsuhiko?"

However, at this moment, Xiaolan, who had finished handling the tableware, returned to the office. After hearing what Mitsuhiko had just said, she couldn't help but praise with some encouragement:

"That's awesome! If I'm free on the day of your school festival, I'll come and see it!"

"Huh? Really, Sister Xiaolan!"

When Mitsuhiko heard what Xiaolan said, he felt greatly encouraged, but then he still said a little embarrassedly:

"However, my script still has a lot of problems, and it still needs to be revised..."

Saying this, Mitsuhiko looked at Gao Yuan:

"How's it going? Brother Mingzhi, do you have any good suggestions?"

Somewhat seriously, Mitsuhiko looked at Gao Yuan, as if expecting Gao Yuan to give good suggestions for his script.

"good suggestion?"

Regarding this, Gao Yuan looked at the manuscript in hand and didn't know where to start -

"Actually, I haven't figured out how to write the final script yet..."

Seeing Gao Yuan flipping through the script he had written with some hesitation, Mitsuhiko thought for a moment, glanced at Xiao Ai and Ayumi on the side, and then couldn't help but say:

"And I haven't decided on the final outcome yet..."

Thinking back to what Xiao Ai said after watching the movie in the morning, Mitsuhiko was hesitant to change the happy ending that he had originally envisioned but had not yet written.

As for Gao Yuan, when he heard Mitsuhiko talking about the ending, he still hadn’t figured out the ending, so he couldn’t help but say:

"It's true...the ending of this story is not easy to write..."

——After all, from the opening page of the manuscript, I didn’t even understand what kind of story it was intended to be, and I couldn’t even tell that it would be a script for a special feature film like “Masked Superman”.

"What kind of theme do you want to tell the story?"

Tentatively, Gao Yuan said.

“Of course it’s a story about ‘love’ and ‘justice’!”

Mitsuhiko said very seriously, and also gave an explanation:

"Before writing this script, I studied a large number of excellent works and found that the most enduring themes are always these two!"

"Yes, yes!"

Speaking of this, Ayumi couldn't help but interjected:

"This is really a romantic story theme!"

"Then why 'Masked Superman'?"

Gao Yuan continued to ask, wanting to see where to start and guide them to modify the script——

"Because 'Masked Superman' is so good-looking!"

At this moment, when Gao Yuan asked this greeting, Yuantai started to answer, and Yuantai said excitedly:

"Fighting against evil forces is so exciting!"

In this regard, after hearing the words of Ayumi and Genta one after another, Gao Yuan couldn't help but feel a little helpless——

It seems that the creation of this script should have been completed by the three of them together, right?

"But there's no need to play 'Masked Superman'!"

At the same time, after hearing Yuanta and others' thoughts, Conan, who also didn't want to act in this drama, said from the side:

"Otherwise, let's play a criminal drama! Isn't it common? Criminal policemen fight with criminals in order to chase them, and there will even be scenes of shooting back and forth between each other! Isn't this better than 'Masked Superman'? It’s more exciting and more real!”

With that said, Conan looked at Mitsuhiko and continued:

"Misuhiko, you have said it before, don't you want to act in a story that is not true at all? Wouldn't it be better to change it to a real criminal drama?"

Then, Conan looked at Ayumi:

"Besides, the detectives support and help each other, and the love created in this way is more romantic, isn't it?"

Finally, Conan faced Yuantai and said very cleverly:

"Also, if you act in a criminal drama, you don't have to act like an ugly 'Pork Demon Man'. Isn't that great?"

Suddenly, just in time, after Conan pointed out the benefits of acting in criminal scenes in three aspects, Mitsuhiko, Ayumi, and Genta all looked slightly shaken on their expressions.

So, after seeing that his words seemed to have an effect, Conan turned to Gao Yuan, smiled and rubbed the back of his head and said:

"What do you think, Brother Mingzhi?"

In this regard, seeing that Conan had already mentioned this, Gao Yuan nodded and said:

"Indeed...and it's easier to perform a criminal story than 'Masked Superman', so why not just change it to a criminal story?"

Hearing this, Mitsuhiko thought silently for a while, then nodded and couldn't help but say:

"That's right...it's okay to change the story of a female spy who betrayed an evil organization to a criminal story, but if it's not 'Masked Superman', then what kind of protagonist should be able to make the female spy fall in love with him at first sight?"

After seriously thinking about the situation after changing the story mode, Mitsuhiko was a little concerned about the changes——

"Why do you have to write it like this?"

But in this regard, after hearing that even though Mitsuhiko is willing to change the script of "Masked Superman" into a criminal story, he still insists on writing a plot that is very similar to reality, Takato couldn't help but said:

"After rewriting, the plot can be completely reconstructed..."

"Huh? How should I write it?"

Mitsuhiko asked in confusion:

"Brother Mingzhi, do you have any good ideas?"

In this regard, facing Mitsuhiko's direct inquiry, Gao Yuan couldn't help but use his imagination. While thinking about it, he recalled some plots he had seen before, and then he probably thought of something and blurted out:

"For example... the male protagonist is a... well-known detective! One day when he was visiting an amusement park with his childhood sweetheart... his girlfriend, he met... a woman who was sitting on a bench and had lost her memory. So, the protagonist came out of With the responsibility of the police and the gentle care of his girlfriend, the two of them helped the amnesiac woman find her memory..."

Gao Yuan was a little confused at the beginning. Subconsciously, Gao Yuan felt that he had mixed some plot fragments together to say this sentence. Even the opening paragraph was almost subconsciously uttering the opening lines of the original theatrical version of Conan. Fortunately, Gao Yuan finally figured out his thoughts and roughly told the beginning of a story.

I don’t know if it was because the members of the Young Detective Team found the beginning of this story very interesting. After hearing that Gao Yuan stopped talking about the story halfway through, Mitsuhiko, Ayumi, and Genta suddenly became curious. , looking at Gao Yuan with expectant eyes, waiting a little anxiously for Gao Yuan to tell the story behind——

"A well-known detective, a woman with amnesia... looks very interesting!"

Mitsuhiko said in surprise.

"Hurry up, brother Mingzhi, I want to hear the rest of the story!"

Ayumi began to urge.

"How do we get our memories back? Are they going to play in an amusement park?"

Yuantai said puzzled.

Not only did the three members of the Young Detective Team care about this, but Xiaolan also seemed to be very interested in the story Gao Yuan told, and couldn't help but ask:

"Why did that woman lose her memory?"

"In terms of general plot design, this kind of character is generally not a simple character."

Faintly, Xiao Ai actually echoed this.

"Probably a victim of something involved?"

Seeing that the story told by Gao Yuan was very effective, Conan said the same thing.

So, it was originally just a casual story, but now faced with the questioning of everyone present, Gao Yuan had no choice but to bite the bullet and try to tell the story——

"Well... Later, when the hero and heroine were helping the amnesiac woman to find her memory, the heroine accidentally fell into danger due to an accident at the amusement park facility. Just when the hero was about to save the heroine, that A woman with amnesia took the lead and rescued the heroine, and at this moment, the hero discovered that the woman with amnesia had extraordinary skills..."

Gao Yuan reluctantly told the story with a wry smile, and then he realized that he was almost copying the plot development of a certain theatrical version of the original work.

Therefore, worried that this kind of plot might actually play out in reality, Gao Yuan had to stop talking and could not go on -

"Wow! So cool!"

However, as the content of the story told by Gao Yuan gradually revealed that the "amnesia woman" might have a secret, Mitsuhiko and others immediately said in surprise:

"Who is that sister who lost her memory? Is she also a policeman? She was injured while chasing a vicious gangster, and then lost her memory, right?"

Ayumi asked curiously as she began to guess the plot.

"Perhaps she is the vicious gangster. She might have been injured and lost her memory because she was chased by the police!"

Mitsuhiko speculated further.

"Anyway..."

In this regard, hearing that they had begun to speculate, Gao Yuan felt that his goal seemed to have been achieved, so he said to the young detective team:

"That's probably what I mean. By giving a sense of mystery little by little, and then giving explanations step by step, so that the plot gradually deepens, you can reconstruct the script very well! If you write according to this idea, the plot will be It becomes interesting, doesn’t it?”

"That's right..."

Seeing that Gao Yuan was not going to continue talking, but instead started teaching like a teacher, Mitsuhiko couldn't help but feel a little disappointed, but he quickly cheered up and said seriously:

"I learned it! I will use this to revise the script!"

"Ah! But I still want to hear the next story!"

Ayumi also said a little disappointed.

"The rest of the story... is up to your imagination!"

Gao Yuan said this:

"It was originally an imaginary story. No matter how it develops, as long as it can be justified, it is a good story!"

"I understand!"

Hearing what Gao Yuan said, Mitsuhiko couldn't help but said thoughtfully:

"Just like how I helped Sister Yuanzi think about the script just now, based on the existing script and story, and adding reasonable imagination, instead of blindly seeking novelty and fun, we can write a better script, right?"

Thinking back to the time when everyone helped Sister Sonoko improve the script, although I, Ayumi, and Genta all imagined a very interesting script, in Sister Sonoko's eyes, it was not a perfect one that could fit the story she had already written. script.

Brother Mingzhi, on the other hand, used the contents of Sister Yuanzi's original script to reasonably expand the story, and immediately came up with a better script.

Therefore, as long as you learn this creative idea, you can write the original script better——

"Brother Mingzhi wanted to teach us how to write a good story, so he gave the example just like that!"

After thinking like this, Mitsuhiko said to Gao Yuan very seriously.

"Huh? Oh..."

Hearing this, although it was not clear what Mitsuhiko understood, looking at his humble look, Gao Yuan felt that his suggestions were probably effective, thinking that Mitsuhiko should have learned how to write his own script. Okay, so Gao Yuan nodded silently and did not deny it.

At this point, after experiencing such twists and turns in the Maori Detective Agency, everyone in the Young Detective Team was pulled by Mitsuhiko and went to the library together, preparing to perfect the script together with everyone's cooperation.

Looking at their sunny and enthusiastic backs, Xiaolan stood at the window on the second floor of the office and looked down, and couldn't help but say:

"Really, I seem to be looking forward to their script more than Sonoko's script! Mr. Akechi, I didn't expect you to have the talent to write scripts!"

With that said, Xiaolan looked behind her at Gao Yuan, who was also preparing to say goodbye——

"No...it's just that I read more works..."

In this regard, Gao Yuan explained helplessly...

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"That's right. I can already vaguely feel the fact that you have been hiding..."

In the evening, in the study room of Zhizhizhai, Xiaoai looked indifferent and said to Gao Yuan who was sitting at the desk:

"There's no point even if you continue to lie to me, it's just going to add to the sadness..."

"Why...why would you say such a thing to me?"

Frowning slightly, Gao Yuan asked seemingly puzzled.

"Because...I'm troubled..."

Lowering his head slightly, Xiao Ai said with a slightly depressed mood:

"I know you are wary of me...but, I can't bear it anymore. I have fallen in love with you from the beginning when I found you, haven't you noticed?"

He raised his head slightly, glanced at Gao Yuan, and continued:

"This is too painful for me, so... I just want to ask for a chance for us to be honest with each other... 'Masked Superman'?"

Suddenly, after saying this, looking at Gao Yuan's blank expression, Xiao Ai's mood suddenly collapsed, revealing an indifferent expression——

"What? Didn't you say you were rehearsing with me? With your current expression, I can't get into the act at all!"

"No……"

Helplessly, Gao Yuan flipped through a new manuscript from his desk and couldn't help but put his forehead on his hands and said:

"So in the end, what script did Mitsuhiko write? Why is it still 'Masked Superman'..."