Rebirth 2003

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　　 A few days later, Cao Xue finally came back. Lu Yang's diet and daily life were finally taken care of, and he could focus more on what he had to do every day. The number of manuscripts of "Eternal Sword" has gradually increased, and the outline of "Dragon Snake Rise" written during working hours has gradually been completed. At the end of March, Lu Yang had already begun to draw up the detailed outline of "Dragon Snake Rise".

The outline is easy to write, but the detailed outline is the most test of people’s patience. Every detail must be considered as much as possible. The level of Chinese martial arts cultivation, Lu Yang refers to the "Dragon and Snake Romance" in his memory, and divides it into Ming Jin, Dark Jin, and Hua Jin. .

Above the level of kinetic energy, it is the way of sincerity. The way of sincerity can predict the danger. If you cannot practice the way of sincerity in a day, there is no guarantee of life in the age of guns. No matter how high the skill is, being surrounded by a group of gunmen will Ten deaths but no life.

"The Romance of the Dragon and the Snake", Lu Yang read it too early. In his last life, he read it in 2008. It has been almost ten years, ten years, enough time for one person to read all of a book. The content has been completely forgotten. If "The Romance of the Dragon and the Snake" is not classic enough, I am afraid that Lu Yang can't remember a single star now.

Lu Yang wrote down all the settings he could remember, and then combined it with the national martial arts data that Teng Hu collected for him to further fill in the settings of the hero and heroines. The Romance of the Dragon and the Snake did a good job, and Lu Yang did not. In the plan to change, the male protagonist is still a high school student with medium academic performance but good athletic talent, and the female lead is still the female leader of the international mysterious organization-Tang Zichen.

　　 The drafting of the outline is destined not to be done in a day or two. Sometimes, a few plot outlines can be drawn up in one day, and sometimes, for several days, it is uncertain how to draw up the next plot outline.

Lu Yang has never written about Chinese martial arts works before. In order to write that kind of immersive fighting feeling, occasionally, Lu Yang will use the form of sketches to outline two characters, or various fights when several characters fight each other. Scenes.

　　 Same as when preparing for "Magic Sword Eternity", this new book, Lu Yang also prepared a character map, this time he didn't ask for help from the painter. All the characters' images were designed by himself in the form of sketches.

　　 Tang Zichen flutters in white clothes, has a dusty air, is tall, has a calm face, and has energetic eyes. Regarding this role, Lu Yang only set a portrait painting.

　　 While the male protagonist Wang Chao and Lu Yang have designed more than a dozen character drawings. Tang Zichen's image is basically fixed, because when she comes out, she is already a master of Huajin, touching the threshold of the way of sincerity.

　　 When the actor Wang Chao first appeared on the stage, he was just an ordinary high school student. Later, as he practiced, his skill increased day by day, and his body shape and spirit naturally changed a little bit.

　　 In order to highlight the changes in his own image in the course of his cultivation, when Lu Yang designed this figure, several of them were finely naked.

　　 From the design drawings in Lu Yang's pen, it can be seen that Wang Chao's greenish aura has been reduced a little bit. Not only has his face become firm and tough, but the muscles and skin color on his body are gradually changing.

　　 There are two of them. Lu Yang designed the image of Wang Chao when he was practicing. The muscles and blood vessels all over his body are very prominent, and he looks like a murderer.

In addition to the character design drawings of Wang Chao and Tang Zichen, Lu Yang also wanted to draw one or two pictures of all the important supporting roles in the book. As for the map in the book, Lu Yang didn’t need to design himself this time, so he went to the bookstore and bought ten. A few maps can be used.

　　There are mainland China, Hong Kong and Taiwan, Southeast Asia, Europe, and the United States. As long as the countries that may appear in the book, Lu Yang buys a map, and then conceives the plot of the story based on the map.

　　 Because he can't recall the plot of "The Dragon and the Snake", Lu Yang designed the plot outline of "The Dragon and the Snake" according to his own ideas.

After 　　 bought the map, Lu Yang began to draw lines on the map with a pencil.

　　 An online novel with two or three million words at every turn must have one or two main lines. How the main line is designed often determines whether a book feels good or uncomfortable to readers!

　　 Many readers often have similar feelings, that is, many new books, the opening two or three hundred thousand words are very exciting, but in the middle and late stages, everyone feels unsightly.

　　 The reason is often only one-that is the main line!

In the early stage of a web article, there are only two or three big plots of two or three hundred thousand words. Some readers can even write two or three hundred thousand words for one big plot. A plot is very well conceived. Even if you don’t write an outline, it’s too much in your heart. After brewing for some time, the effect of writing is often not bad.

If the originality is good, two or three hundred thousand words in the early stage can often give readers a great sense of novelty and attract many readers. However, if the main line is not designed to be attractive enough, in the middle and late stages, it will inevitably fall into the parental short procrastination plot and a little bit of consumption. Losing the reader's sense of expectation for the story, in the end, a new work that had the momentum of a big fire entered the ranks of the street.

The biggest gap between the author of 　　 Great God and the author of bashing street is often reflected in the middle and later stages of a book! The great **** can write the story more and more wonderfully. As the number of words increases, more and more readers can be gathered, while the writers who rush to the street write and write, as the number of words grows, the readers become less and less.

　　 As for how to design the main line?

　　Different authors have different design methods. Lu Yang did not have much personal understanding of the main line design before, and he often made a fuss about the protagonist’s upgrading and emotional progress.

　　 But today, as the number of words he writes increases and his experience gets richer, Lu Yang finally has some new insights recently.

　　 In drawing up the story line this time, Lu Yang adopted several ways to integrate with each other, which ways?

　　First, map!

　　 is just these two words, many people may be at a loss, can the map be integrated into the main line of the story?

The answer is yes. This inspiration was learned by Lu Yang from online games. Anyone who has played online games knows that when a player first enters an online game, the first one to enter is Novice Village, and wait for the player to arrive. After a certain level, you will enter a small city, and then there will be places such as big cities, capitals, and holy places.

Inspired by this, when Lu Yang designed the main line of "Dragon and Snake Rising", he had a very clear idea. When the story began, Wang Chao was in an ordinary inland city where few people practiced martial arts. Here, because of encountering Tang Zichen, a master of Chinese martial arts, he stepped into the threshold of martial arts, and when his strength reached a certain level, he was invested in Guangdong where the style of martial arts is stronger.

Step by step, through the richness of the regional martial arts and the number of masters, the story will be pushed to the climax step by step. Different regions, the number of masters, and the height of the master kungfu state determine the degree of danger Wang Chao can encounter. Will gradually increase.

　　 From the geographical aspect, to set the main line, many authors may have done this consciously and unconsciously.

　　 Lu Yang took a pen to draw a line on the map, he was drawing a main line.

　　 When the story starts, you can determine the direction of the story by looking at the direction of the thin lines on the map.

　　 In addition, Lu Yang's second way to set the main line is-Guoshu!

　　 As a novel of national arts, cultivation is indispensable!

　　 Readers who have read the upgrade essay know that in the early stage of the upgrade essay, the protagonist must practice low-level exercises. As his strength increases, he will practice intermediate and high-level exercises little by little.

　　The subject matter of Chinese martial arts is destined to be difficult to distinguish so many levels among the exercises, but the low level does not mean that there is no level.

　　 Even if you practice a kind of exercise, such as Taijiquan and Bajiquan, there are differences between the difficulty and the power.

　　 Even some kung fu that is not as famous as Tai Chi and Baji have their own unique skills. These skills can be used alone or combined with Tai Chi and Ba Chi. The power cannot be underestimated.

　　 For this, Lu Yang spent more than a week to separate the moves of each exercise method and compare it with the power and difficulty of other exercise methods. In the end, he also developed a main line for upgrading.

　　 This kind of main line only exists in Lu Yang's outline, and it is difficult for readers to see it at a glance.

　　 When "Dragon Snake Rise of the Land" was written, it didn't seem to be an upgrade text. In fact, the upgraded attributes are hidden in the plot.

　　 In addition to the above two points ~www.wuxiaspot.com~ Lu Yang also pulled out two main lines, and finally merged the four main lines into one.

　　 The two main lines drawn out are feelings and rewards!

　　 In terms of feelings, it seems that Wang Chao and Tang Zichen's feelings are slowly warming up, and they finally come together.

　　 Actually, Lu Yang remembers reading a piece of theory before, and that theory is called the hierarchy of needs theory!

This theory was developed by the American social psychologist Maslow. In this theory, people live in this world and have five kinds of needs. These five kinds of needs, from low to high, are: physiological needs, safety needs, Social needs, respect needs, and self-worth realization needs!

This theory seems to have nothing to do with the "Dragon and Snake Rise" that Lu Yang is preparing to write, but in Lu Yang's view, this is also an upgrade system. As long as this system is also included in the main line of the story, the story is refreshing. Must be stronger!

　　 The reason why Wang Chao was so desperately practicing Chinese martial arts at the beginning was that besides his love for martial arts, it was very important that he wanted to become stronger through himself and truly walk into the world of Tang Zichen, help her, protect her, and stay with her. In this respect, reluctance can be counted as the level of physiological needs.

　　 When Wang Chao really enters the world of warriors, he will find that there are many masters, and he may be killed at any time, so he can practice harder. This is a safety requirement.

　　Wait for others to cultivate higher levels of national arts, and to be safe in their own right. What needs to be pursued is almost already a social need and a need for respect. In the end, when he himself was almost invincible, he wanted to explore the deepest path of martial arts, which was already the need to realize his self-worth. R1152

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