My Wife Is Konoha Tsunade

Street Diary: Summary of Volume Two

This volume was originally not that long, but I forgot to divide it in the middle.

It is the sum of the contents of the second and third volumes originally envisaged.

Reluctantly, it achieved my expected goal.

But there are more questions than the first volume.

There are three main problems.

The first one is the question of rhythm.

Starting from Chapter 70, the rhythm has been deviated.

Too much daily, causing readers to drop a lot.

After accelerating the pace, the outbound investigation approaching the shelves, and there was a meaningless plot.

It's not that it's meaningless, it's just different from what you imagined.

It was originally intended to write stories other than Konoha, and to bring some technical things.

But during that time I wrote too fast, which led to irrigation.

The plot of the second half of the war, I personally think it is still up to the standard.

But there is too much fighting, and the rhythm is a bit too fast.

The second is the character problem.

The supporting role in the second volume was not outstanding for his own reasons.

I originally wanted to write about the progress of Tsunade, Minato, Obito, Kakashi and others.

But the expressiveness is insufficient, and some tool people.

The biggest villain, Uchiha Madara, is also poorly portrayed.

The third, invincible text.

I found that I am not good at writing invincible essays.

Because it is a fan, I dare not add too many original characters.

As a result, the protagonist is too invincible and loses the fun of growing up.

This can be regarded as a mistake I made before writing the article.

Because it was too invincible, the original biggest selling point of farming also disappeared in this volume.

In the next book, I should no longer write invincible articles.

In addition to these three, there are many minor issues, which are not explained one by one.

The third volume should be the last volume.

Many big readers can also see that my book is not long.

Unless it is a parallel world, it turns into a comprehensive comic.

But this book does not have this setting, and maybe I will write it in the next book.

I originally estimated it to be 1 million words, but now it seems that it may be shorter.

But I promise to finish the book smoothly.

No eunuch.

Finish the story.

The name of the third volume is the same as the world.

main content:

The first one, about the construction of Thunder Country and Cloud Shinobi Village, will write some farming content.

The second, the three holy places of Summoning beasts, involves immortals and longevity, as well as some theatrical plots, the dragon veins of Loulan, the treasure chest of bliss in Caoyin Village and so on.

The third is the development of Akatsuki. Obito recruits members and collects tail beasts to confuse Black Zetsu. Finally, in the case of betrayal, Black Zetsu was sealed to completely prevent Project Tsuki no Me.

The fourth is to conquer the land and water to establish a unified country.

Fifth, Shisui, Itachi, Naruto, Sasuke, Hinata, etc. grew up.

The sixth, possible plot of the Ōtsutsuki family.

Seventh, Haruki and Tsunade get married, the finale.

The contents of this volume are basically these seven contents.

Thank you readers for your rewards, recommendations, subscriptions and comments.

At present, the grades of this book are all set at about 1,000, so it can be regarded as just getting started.

In short, thank you very much everyone.

Finally, let's talk about deleting comments. I generally delete comments that have a serious impact on the perception of readers who have not subscribed.

I am also a reader, and I know that seeing such comments greatly affects the reading experience.

So it will be deleted.

Just don't like to leave, there is no need to leave bad reviews.

Everyone is working hard, so why bother to beat the workers.

It's really not easy to write a novel on the street while you are at work.

Be considerate of the author.

I now have games, movies, TV, and going out to play, and all kinds of entertainment time have been cut by more than half.

quite tough.

Thanks again everyone.

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