Legend of the Supreme Soldier

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These two days are in a bad mood, and the mood is very low.

Of course, it's not entirely a question of book reviews, but I still can't ignore book reviews.

To be honest, I feel that I am more serious about writing. My plot is actually not as good as everyone thinks. If I have read my book carefully and sorted out the context, I do n’t know if you will think so.

The main line is unclear, and procrastination is probably the most criticized of this book.

There were indeed many such problems in the first period, but I think it should be smoother later.

But some people say the main line is vague.

What is the main line? Is it necessary to give Ye Chongan a goal such as revenge and life experience?

I do n’t know who defined it this way, but I do n’t agree. Indeed, this is indeed conducive to the contraction of the article, but should all the text come in this mode?

Ye Zhong's life experience is indeed different from the average person, but I haven't lifted the corner of this veil yet. A lot of foreshadowing has been buried in the front, and everyone may understand it when you see the back.

But I still wrote this way before. I can see Ye Zhong ’s experience. Ye Zhong ’s experience has been passive until now.

This is different from my original plan, which should have been Ye Ye's life experience and so on.

With the development of the plot, my thinking of the character Ye Zhong gradually deepened, thus denying the previous idea.

Ye Zhong should be confused now!

This is the main tone of the entire writing so far! This confusion will manifest itself in many ways. Things like the pursuit of life should belong to a higher level of pursuit, which is not realistic for Ye Zhong now.

Instinct is never love, and love on one hand is destined to fail in front of people like Ye Zhong, unless, unless she can make Ye Zhong fall in love with her!

Organizing forces, hehe, with Ye Zhong's personality, the possibility of doing this is basically zero.

The escape is because the strength of the two sides is too great. I think this is undoubtedly the simplest and most reasonable choice, and Ye Zhong has always liked this choice.

Because you don't like the characters in a book, it comes down to the book's mistakes. This is not too kind!

The plot is slow. Actually, I personally feel okay. I like the details, which is slightly different from the requirements of the web. A friend used to be right ~ www.readwn.com ~ The details will make it easier for everyone and build a whole new world in the brain more clearly.

I do n’t like writing settings, I ’m sick of listing them. I think the setting should slowly penetrate into the text so that it doesn't feel boring.

YY is correct, but YY should be reasonable, this is my idea. The foreshadowing in front will make the back more enjoyable, huh, huh, but there are still many readers who can't help but rush.

Last night a friend said that my books are like travel notes, not like novels. I think this is a fair comment.

Writing always makes people think and substitute, even if it is just a business novel. When writing about Xuelin Sun's confusion, I was also confused myself! Ye Chong's drifting east and west is related to my experience during this time. The encounters in life are wonderful and ruthless. During this time, I have experienced too many gatherings. For a time, I cannot find a sense of belonging! This is probably the root of my bad mood these two days.

Today, it is difficult to write, writing such a random feeling, on the one hand, it also explains some questions to everyone.

Everyone is welcome to discuss.

Fang wanted to write on September 15