Konoha Super God Hyuga

The first time it was put on the shelves, Xia Mi really didn't understand it. I mentioned it to the editor and thought that there would be shortcomings. As a result, it was too late to write a testimonial.

Let me say something bad first.

Some friends saw the present from the open book. You should have a clearer understanding of Lu Chi's writing style. It was a bit astringent at first, and then slowly became smooth. Now that there are more than a hundred chapters, Lu Chi feels that it is at least a normal net writing level.

Some people may have noticed that Lu Chi has revised the previous chapters on a large scale, and the previous chapters have been greatly deleted, especially those in the twenty-odd chapters. Lu Chi has revised a lot of typos. At that time, Lu Zhe was more confused, just as confused as other newcomer authors: Does anyone read my book? Does anyone subscribe? How can there be no comments, and critics are fine.

As a newcomer, this book made two big mistakes.

One, the system. The setting was too complicated at the beginning, and it was not something that a newbie could control. So that in the later stage, Lu Chi Bacteria subconsciously ignored the system. When revising the previous chapters, a large part of Lunaria is repairing the system, and the plot has not changed, so feel free to read it.

Second, the heroine. The heroine's presence is so weak that many people ask who the heroine is. There is no way to change this, we can only strengthen and strengthen the presence of the heroine in the subsequent chapters. Let me talk about it here, the heroine is Moonlight Sarolo, please refer to Hashimoto. Kannai.

Of course there are still many shortcomings, but please allow Lu Chi to praise yourself.(Read more @ hotmtlnovel.xyz)

1. Lu Chi’s outline is well-written. Although the original plan of the book will not be too long (a plan of more than one million), because of the outline, the possibility of eunuchs is relatively low, and the plot design is relatively good. Routine.

Second, although the writing style is not full, but Lu Chijun will always put some materials in a certain sentence in a chapter. I believe that if you look at it carefully, you will see a sentence you like very much.

Third, Lu Chi Bacteria is more logical, so the techniques or objects in the book are reasonable.

For example, the reward for "Barbecue Master" is the nail punch in the gourmet animation, and the reward for the undead duo is the black ghost of the undead.

There may be ill-conceived things, but at least I think about it.

Some readers said that the duel with Xiao Li was too much. Lu Chi thought about it for a while, it was over, and he went to revise it. Lu Chi is not the kind of hard-headed person. But I have to explain. Although it is wrong, Lu Chi checked the information. In the animation, Kai said that Xiao Li can open to five doors. In actual combat, Li opened to four doors. Therefore, Lu Chi thinks that Li Zhongren's exam is still a year away. It should be reasonable to open four courses, but he didn't consider the question of whether the body can bear it, and the two students played as if they could keep up.

Wrong, what to do, change it.

People make mistakes and change them, and make them stronger.

Believe that anyone who is chasing my book will see a Lu Chi who is slowly getting stronger.

Thanks to the friends who have been voting for recommendation, the friends who rewarded, the friends who have already voted for the monthly ticket today, thank you for your support.

In the end, Lu Chi probably understands that there will not be too many subscriptions and will not be discouraged. Just ask for the support of capable friends. Lu Chi’s goal is to be full attendance, and use six or seven hours every night to earn rent Right.

Key points: full attendance, two chapters a day, strive hard, dare not use life guarantee.

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