The first volume is finished. Although no one has read it, I might as well open a single chapter to summarize it.

To be honest, the content of these more than one hundred chapters is a bit poor (embarrassing) in my opinion.

Looking back now, there are many reasons. On the one hand, it was my first time writing and lack of experience, and on the other hand, in order to comply with some settings and subsequent plots.

When I was writing the outline of the second volume, I had an idea: why not just abandon the first volume, start the book from the second volume, and intersperse the contents of the first volume with memories.

Later I gave up. On the one hand, it had been serialized for a while and several book friends had been following it. It was a bit irresponsible to start a new book like this.

On the other hand, when I read a book myself, I really hate this method of using memories to whet the reader's appetite.

Coupled with the comparison of some plots, I can't control my writing ability by describing it only based on my memories (although it's not good to write it directly like this.)

Let’s go back to the problems with the first volume.

I can realize that the most obvious thing is that the timeline is stretched too long, making the plot seem a bit empty.

In fact, the method is also simple, just set up more opposing conflicts.

The protagonist belongs to Yu Ling, so like most cool novels, adding one or more opposing organizations and more events targeting them can easily fill up the plot, or even write hundreds of chapters.

But why not? The only opposite is the spirit society, and the plot is pitiful.

The mission at the Lianyun Mountain military base was the beginning of the Linghui conspiracy, but it was not until a year later that it officially surfaced.

This is because of the overall outline and setting.

The synopsis will contain spoilers, so let’s briefly talk about the settings that have already been mentioned.

Yuling is an organization that has existed since the beginning of human civilization when there was no distinction between countries. It has a super AI like "Yuan" and controls technology that transcends the times and extraordinary abilities that transcend technology.

Supreme beings who can survive nuclear explosions, as well as inherited masters who are stronger than ordinary supreme beings, are all with Yu Ling.

Under this setting, I really can't convince myself that there can be so many people who are hostile to Yuling, and they can be active and keep causing trouble for them.

You can't weaken the intelligence and abilities of other characters for the sake of the plot.

Therefore, Linghui first showed its weakness to the enemy, and after a battle, disappeared completely. It secretly planned the incident and completed all the arrangements where the protagonist could not see it. The plan was only completed at Yuling's ten-year exchange meeting.

Relying on Ji Guang's talent for spiritual patterns, Lingshan's internal response, and some other factors that will be explained later, they were able to successfully hide from Yu Ling and achieve their ultimate goal.

Of course, there are other solutions, such as the group of ancient spirit beasts mentioned at the exchange meeting.

But the problem is that the ancient spirit beast group is a mission where everyone will die at the fourth level. The protagonist goes through it one by one, it is better to send an artillery battery over...

A lot of changes were made to the outline of the first volume, and a lot was deleted, and in the end it could only be what it is now.

Next is the content of the second volume. Compared with the first volume, the second volume has fewer problems. The plot setting is still the same as the first volume, where ordinary daily life and battles are interspersed, but it will not be like the first volume. It’s as empty as a volume, at least that’s what I think (laughs)

Let’s start with this summary. There are still some issues that I haven’t noticed. Book friends are also welcome to put forward their own opinions on the plot and discuss it.

My purpose is to share my story in a good way. You all want to see good stories. We all have the same goal, so we should work together. After all, someone tells it and someone says it, that’s the story. Otherwise, it's just a paragraph.

Next, the heroine Ji Xiaoxiang, who has been idle for more than a hundred chapters, is officially online. Speaking of this, I still have to explain the emotional line of this book.

The emotional line is the key! The emotional line is the key! The emotional line is the key!

In terms of setting, Xiao Bosheng is a new consciousness that emerged after the souls of Blue Star and Earth merged. Although he has memories of the two worlds, he has no sense of belonging to either world.

And he is an orphan.

This is the premise.

How can a person who has no sense of belonging be required to develop feelings for the world and fight to protect it?

There is no way to talk about family ties, then there is only friendship and love.

Friendship is too shallow after all.

Even in today's impetuous society, I still believe in the existence of love, and I believe that someone will try their best to love another person.

This is the author's idea, which is reflected in my book. Love is not only an indispensable part, but also the focus.

After all, Xiao Bosheng is a new soul and longs to belong, so after Tang Yubing's almost confession, he impulsively agreed to be with her.

However, when the ability is insufficient, impulsiveness comes at a price.

I spent more than ten chapters describing the daily life of Xiao Bosheng and Tang Yubing. On the one hand, Xiao Bosheng, who is only at the first level, is indeed indispensable in the task of Yuling. On the other hand, it is also for their final separation. Make foreshadowing.

Tang Yubing prefers a stable life, but Xiao Bosheng does not. He pursues strong power and is willing to take on corresponding responsibilities, so their inappropriateness is doomed.

(By the way, Xiao Bosheng’s character and his various thoughts are not only influenced by the memory of two lives, but also have some other reasons. This involves spoilers, so everyone can guess.)

The relationship experience with Tang Yubing also affected some of Xiao Bosheng's thoughts, which will be reflected in his subsequent relationship development.

That’s all. Any more would be spoilers.

In other words, I originally wanted to write an emotional article, but the imaginative part was added to the outline later to satisfy my desire to be a middle school student (face covering).

A friend mentioned earlier about issues related to the daily plot. Well, I will try my best to pay attention to it in the second volume, but in fact, some of these issues are unavoidable before the plot progresses to a certain level.

The experience of being entrusted with life is certainly unforgettable, but life is more about daily necessities.

Compared with a life-and-death, hearty battle, I personally feel that warm and slow daily life is more empowering and worth remembering.

The former remembers the feeling, but the latter can remember the scene.

However, Xiao Bosheng has reached the second level after all. As the most special second level in the history of Yuling, he is qualified to participate in more events. At the end of the first volume, Ji Guang's entry into the shadow world also brought peace to Blue Star. Added variables.

Therefore, the daily routine will only be part of the plot, and it will not be a continuous week-long routine like before.

Well, that’s all for now.

Our protagonist, Xiao Bosheng, finally gained the power he expected. But if he had known about the process, would he still be so looking forward to the result?

When he was first in the first level, he was like the wind in the valley. Now, he has a certain amount of capital and can break through the mountains that trapped him.

In the future, what will he have to pay to jump out of the valley of fate, truly become the protagonist who controls everything and can do anything, and become the star that truly lights up the world?

Volume 2 - Growth, please look forward to it.

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