Infinite Legend: The Mechanic

So, "Overwatch" is finally completely and completely over.

I don't want to say whether it is successful or unsuccessful, but at least this story is still what I want to tell. But to be honest, "Overwatch" has also received a lot of criticism, often so large that I almost wanted to give up. But I'm still insisting on at least telling the story completely.

If the first part of "Overwatch" is a war around the core of the Black Sun, then the second part of "Overwatch" is a plot between Peacock and Shimada Ryu. So, in fact, the big scenes in the next chapter will be much less.

Moreover, this part also exposed many of my problems, in terms of writing, writing, and experience. If I were to write "Overwatch" again, I would estimate that the number of words could be reduced by about one third. Because when I re-read this part myself, I really felt that the amount of information contained in each chapter is too small.

This makes me feel that the plot in many places can't be pushed, and I'm particularly tired of writing it myself. So, there is too much to improve in this regard. Only then can I find that as a generation of masters, Jin Yong can depict a rolling picture of martial arts with hundreds of thousands of words, while I can only write one stage with hundreds of thousands of words. The gap is too big.

But, the reason why the next part of Overwatch is longer is because it depicts too many characters. In Ten Ren, apart from the Four Guards and Six Guards, the others have some space to describe. This has made me want to shorten the length of the story, and want to complete the plot has been a painful struggle. So many things were not written in the end.

For example, originally I wanted Hanzang and Genji to fall in love with peacocks at the same time, and then they had conflicts. But in the end, the plot ended after Genji confessed to the peacock, because if the plot was unfolded, it would really be unstoppable.

So to sum up, I am very satisfied with the first part of Overwatch, which is relatively compact. In the next part of Overwatch, I can only say that I am very satisfied with the design of the plot, but I think too much, or even too much, to make this chapter too loose and too slow.

Therefore, you need to make your language simple, this is the first one that needs to be improved. In addition, it is necessary to avoid the multi-cue approach in the next chapter of Overwatch in the plot design. This is the second one that needs improvement.

However, in the second part of "Overwatch", I am still quite satisfied with the characters I have created. Peacock, d.va, Jiu Bingwei and Shi Bingwei are women, as well as Shimada Ryu and Zhang Feng. I also used a lot of pen and ink to portray the personality of these people, and in the end the characteristics were more distinct.

Then there is the question about d.va.

Actually, it was confirmed long ago that d.va bento was sent. She must be a woman who appeared early in Tang Yu, because in the later period, her ability was very embarrassing.

Can multi-line operation, reaction speed, operation speed be comparable to computers? In fact, after Tang Yu installed a photon computer in his brain, his combat power was completely exploded. In this case, I still have to take care of d.va's appearances, so that she has some record, not to become a vase, it is really difficult.

So you can imagine how embarrassing she would be if she took d.va back as ‘l’. The most likely result is a sweet rhetoric that says, "Her husband, you are back!" every time you go home, and then start the rbq.

If you leave her in the world ten years ago, it is a very cruel thing. Because she will see another d.va grow up slowly, enjoy a happy life that she has never had, become a big star, and take away all her previous auras. This feeling is more terrible than killing her.

Therefore, d.va disappears, but some of her memories affect d.va in this timeline. The two are combined to some extent to be the best result.

So what I want to say about "Overwatch", Philips blade, give me a dozen first.

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Then it's time for the popular actors to come to the photo! !

Role 1: Hank

Actors: Book Friends-Uncle Zhang

Xiaojing: So Uncle Zhang plays Hank! Become a soldier 77 in the first part of Overwatch, and stand firmly behind Jack Morrison! In the battle of Sejong City Laboratories and the battle of Incheon both showed their faces. In the next part, there is not much drama, but it is also due diligence to protect the special envoy Roger. What do you want to say about this journey of Overwatch?

Uncle Zhang: It’s just that I’m not willing to be in the Resident Evil Raccoon City operation. Only this work is the protagonist. The other Resident Evil series are all soy sauces. So I suggest that the author added such a dragon set, and it is also an overwatch pioneer. Blizzard's work is very satisfactory, so I always want to explore its backstory. Unfortunately, Blizzard may only serve as a trial of a fps game when this game is released. The backstory is limited to a small part of the elaboration of each character. There are no official novels or comics about Overwatch, thank the author Jun for giving me this opportunity so that I can complete part of my regret, sincerely.

Xiao Jing: So the prototype of this Hank is the fourth survivor in Resident Evil 2~www.wuxiaspot.com~ the death hunk! But because of the plot, this character is more like a veteran. There is still a gap with the image of Hank.

Uncle Zhang: It doesn't matter. At that time, I had to choose between the sergeant in the Delta Special Forces and Hank before giving this answer. I am very happy to be able to participate in this story!

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Role 2: Zhang Feng

Actors: Book Friends-arms detroit

Xiao Jing: Then Song Dafeng, which is bad in this story, oh no, Zhang Feng said~~~ As such a big bad guy, what do you think?

Arms detroit: I was content with a dragon suit, and I was suddenly very happy to become a plot villain in the world. I am still very fond of the author’s own innovations in peacock settings. After all, reasonable innovations are limitless. It’s interesting.

Xiao Jing: But I am even asking Zhang Feng!

Arms detroit: For your own evaluation of the dragon plot, it is a normal villain, but I feel deeply malicious in Zhang Feng's final ending. Haha, but still very happy to read the novels I participated in. I will always support the author greatly.

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Role 3: Martin Hrawford

Actors: Book Friends-asphyxia- suffocation

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Role 4: Zhou Qing

Actors: Book Friends-Zhou Young

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Interview of the above two characters, wait for them to organize the language and put it on later!

Then, "Mechanic of Infinite Legend" is about to enter the next volume and advance to the battle! ! !

ps: This chapter is free.