I’m Really Not Targeting the Mages

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Hello everyone.

I am a barbarian trainee "Lolita War" who has been practicing for half a month.

As the one destined to save Qui-Nan.

I'm going to take Xiaobo SS Vilan's lair today!

Um.

After all, it is the Guandibo SS in the first chapter.

It won't be too difficult anyway.

My martial arts.

It's not for nothing!

Eat me with an axe!

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two thousand yea later.

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I'll check the guide!

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"Narrator: The timeline has been successfully closed! A new story is about to begin... LOADING..."

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call.

The first part is finally finished.

This is the foreshadowing from the first chapter.

It's finally closed.

This feeling is really cool.

It's just that the process is a bit tormented.

On the one hand, it has to be hidden.

On the other hand, you have to carefully bury something.

Bury something.

Can't be too obvious.

Otherwise it is too easy to expose.

It can't be too cryptic.

that would be awkward

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Speaking of which.

during early writing.

Many brothers pointed out that I was a bit abrupt in terms of plot connection.

It is also because of this.

I only changed the script for Legacy of Time later.

The original script wasn't like that.

That's also an ingenious structure.

But it is very different from the current version.

This is done to give a hint in advance.

Benefits are.

Everything is more logical.

The connection is smoother.

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The downside is.

In fact, some book friends should have guessed it in advance.

For example, book friend Kai Shakai.

It seems that after the end of Legacy of Time, he has a similar chapter.

It's just that I didn't think of any means to achieve it.

This lacks shock.

If you don't write the part about the legacy of time.

Perhaps the shock will be more violent.

But this is an ideal result after weighing the pros and cons.

And in order to echo this result.

Like a jigsaw puzzle.

You can find clues in the book including but not limited to the following

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"1. Lolita was repeatedly killed 99 times by the bottom wave SS in the first level, which is unreasonable in itself, but in this book, there may be 1/2/3 or even more internal reasons behind all the unreasonableness "

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"2. Roger once recalled that Vilan has many specialties, and he is skilled in combat skills and has a strange and changeable style"

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"3. When going back and forth between Mixing and Quinan, Roger has already touched himself in different time periods because of the 'unknown hand'. This is actually hinting that there may be a formal meeting with him in the future, such as Mobius As it says on the ring, time is a ring, and so is history..."

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"4. Legacy of Time. Honorable Sir Lanwell. It hints at a possibility"

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"5. When 13 items were fished out of the sea, Roger was deeply pondering when he mentioned the mold of the puppet body..."

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"6. Some Easter eggs about Asgard"

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actually.

If you look at it in hindsight.

There is nothing remarkable about this structural design.

It couldn't be easier to add some foreshadowing to the crazy stuff.

The main thing is persistence and patience.

But I'm still pretty proud.

This structure and the ability to grasp the overall situation.

It proves that the existence of my five large documents, the general outline, the divisional outline, the sub-volume outline, the plot deduction, and the daily detailed outline, is meaningful.

As for settings, monster illustrated book, attribute summary, character card, specialty table, career tree, calculation formula, two-dimensional world setting, wave SS level library...

Should also make sense.

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ah.

How I wish someone would say something in my ear right now.

One key for ten years is really powerful!

instead.

One key for ten years is really fine!

As I replied in the book friend group in the morning

How can there be an author who is born fine.

Only diligence can make up for clumsy ears.

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Because the usual writing is very realistic.

Today's summary is not so rigid.

Think of where to write.

Don't be surprised if the foreword doesn't match the afterword.

Let me wave once.

I just said that "diligence can make up for one's weakness".

I think I'm really a hardworking writer.

certainly.

Some brothers may have the impression that I often ask for leave.

That's right.

Ask for leave.

But it doesn't affect hard work.

I can swear by the name of "Lolita War".

Every time off.

Not because of my laziness.

But for better creation.

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for example.

The state in mid-June is worrying.

I took 4 days off in total.

But after a month, 19W words were still updated.

That's at least not lazy.

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Mention my codeword status here.

I work at least 10 hours a day.

It may be up to 12 hours when the big chapter appears.

Half of the time is spent on outline, setting, and conception.

And my typing speed is slow.

It's really slow.

Initially an average of 1,000 words an hour.

Now I can barely touch the threshold of 1500.

So in the days when you don't ask for leave.

The average number of updated words per day is nearly 7K, which is really stressful for me.

certainly.

I know it's a profession.

Readers can only see what you write.

No one cares about the detailed outline and the like.

So I say this just to defend myself.

Ask for leave.

It's really for better creation.

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especially.

I'm the kind of person who won't save the manuscript once I'm on top.

For example this morning.

I know that waiting is the most uncomfortable for everyone.

We must find a way to make everyone happy in one breath.

The consequence of this is.

After the passion.

It is also easy to encounter the bottleneck of the downturn.

Asking for leave often happens at this time.

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someone said.

You can save the manuscript.

No.

Can't save it.

At least not now.

If there is good health, I will definitely write it for everyone.

Not to mention that trying to save the manuscript will inevitably slow down the update.

As soon as the update slows down, the follow-up reading will drop badly.

This is too fatal for a serial book.

Many people say to keep books.

But if you keep it, it will disappear.

From the opening of the book to the present.

I have replied to many people in this chapter.

To the end of the first part.

I don't know how many people are still there.

Speaking of which.

I suddenly wanted to do a little research.

When did you start reading this book?

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having said so much.

It's not actually a complaint.

in my opinion.

This is web text.

The super high instant feedback and super update pressure force the author to write works full of passion.

But corresponding to it.

The pressure of daily word count also limits further development.

I re-read many chapters today.

I have a lot of regrets in my heart.

There are many places.

I can write better!

many scenes.

I can write more cool ones!

Lots of drama.

I can conceive more cleverly.

It's a pity that there is no if.

The plots in this book.

Can I write more wonderful ones in other books?

I have no idea.

Many times it is really a stroke of God.

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For example, Taikoo Ssangyong's Hugging.

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For example, the echo of Legacy of Time.

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For example, the Porcelain of the Whale Shark King.

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I myself feel that I may not be able to write these plots in the future.

Compared to the splendor shown.

I feel like I'm not handling it optimally.

Although these plots are well prepared.

Take the king of whale sharks, for example.

In order for him to touch Roger.

I designed the thread chain like this

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"Harpy"/"Sky Nest"/"Sky Cable Car"/"Astral Moby Dick"/"Whale Leap Incident"/"Moby Dick Dreamland"/"Whale Shark King Porcelain Success!"

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One ring after another.

The structure is really fine.

What's lacking are the details and wording.

This is also impossible.

It can only be said that my writing still needs rapid evolution.

I hope that I can express what I want to express more clearly and forcefully in the future!

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Review the first part.

I give myself a 6.

10 points out of 10.

Pass because the structure is in place.

Refreshing is enough.

For no better reason than mentioned above.

As for the shortcomings of character creation and scene description, I also know it well.

In fact, I have been trying a little bit.

For example, the recent little Beja.

Speaking of Beatrice.

I can't help but want to talk about other people in the last two volumes.

White wolf.

Demon Lord.

Almost all of the supporting characters I gave them backstories.

But when I wrote it, I found that it didn't work at all!

In the end, only the majority can be cut off.

And the Vera line from before.

As Vilan's daughter.

She should have had more opportunities to play.

But take various factors into consideration.

She was still marginalized by me.

Ah ah ah ah ah.

This is the reason why the pen is not enough!

It's also because of my lack of background

I dare not start the description slowly one by one supporting role.

I don't have the qualifications to make readers wait patiently.

I can only keep making choices.

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Having said that, let me say another word.

In yesterday's chapter, we talked about Vilan's harem.

In fact, that paragraph is not for word count.

Rather, to echo some of the threads mentioned earlier, and enrich the line with a bit of detail:

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"Veran's children are many / Vera tried to kill the father"

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There are many similar things.

It's just that these things have never been said out of their own mouths, and it seems that they are not convincing.

So I rarely mention it.

I wish I could become a god.

Every foreshadowing written has been interpreted or even over-interpreted.

Whenever someone sees the little easter eggs I racked my brains to set up.

That feeling is really too pleasant.

That's one of my two favorite bonds between author and reader.

As for the other kind.

It is companionship.

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The book has been serialized for a long time.

The purpose of telling stories and reading stories is not pure.

I read everyone's chapters every day.

Get a sense of companionship.

Sometimes it's like old friends.

This feeling.

For me, who has zero social interaction in real life.

very important.

thank you all.

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What else do you want to say?

It seems that there is nothing else I want to confide except for the bitterness of "writing online articles is really difficult / I am exhausted with 1.6 million words / it's almost 9 months, when will I finish this book and go on vacation?"

But our story ended up being just an intermediate stop.

The first came to an end.

loli fight...

no.

Roger's journey on the nine planets has just begun.

certainly.

Everyone, don't worry that I will become a crazy water king.

Although there are a total of 4 parts in this book.

The number of words in the first part is equivalent to the sum of the three parts of 234.

That is.

The following three parts are almost all around 60W~70W words.

The total number of words is controlled between 3 million and 3.3 million words.

Not much more than that.

Not too little either.

As for the completion time.

It is similar to what I wrote in the summary of the first five volumes last time.

About March to June next year.

That is.

This book can accompany you for at least 9 months.

I hope everyone can support genuine subscriptions.

Open a custom order if you have the conditions, I really won’t lie to everyone~

The author lives by this.

I also hope that everyone will vote more monthly.

We have finished all the recommendations for this book.

Only the monthly ticket list will be exposed in the future.

Hot sales are not going up.

Still too small.

Therefore, the monthly ticket list is the only exposure channel.

It is also the only source of new subscriptions.

This is an important reason why I have the cheek to keep asking for tickets even if I owe more and ask for leave.

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Talk about something else.

correct.

The character of "Beatrice" is online today.

Thank you so much everyone.

There are also "Sandy" and "Qin".

After reading the book, click on the character list and give it a thumbs up.

We don't ask how many stars there are.

What's the matter with the number of likes of a few girls not as high as that of Mobang Frog?

You don't really think that Roger is in C with the magic frog, do you?

It doesn't matter what the star value is.

But can you give me Sandy's character vest!

in addition.

The draft drawing drawn by Sandy Lihui has been posted in the group before.

Expect a picture to come out in a while.

Still pretty good.

if it is possible.

I will also buy other people's vertical paintings out of my own pocket.

Pictures are always different!

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at last.

Let's chat for a while.

The journey to the planet that some book lovers are looking forward to can only be started with the third volume.

The main line content of the second part still revolves around Kui Mi's double stars, multiple histories and the forbidden curse of extermination.

Next I may make some changes and try.

Try to write something new.

certainly.

The role of good brothers is indispensable.

After all, Double Star still has a lot of maps waiting for the lolita to fight... Bah!

Waiting for Roger to drive.

There is also a new map: Sea of ​​Ruins.

The whale shark is also a very vengeful guy.

And with the return of history and the appearance of the Abyss of Destruction.

The secret of the alchemist.

The whereabouts of the two of Heiqu.

The strategy of the gods.

It will also surface one by one.

The scenes conceived in my mind.

Just thinking about it makes my blood boil!

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"Reminder: Found a pre-update game version, do you want to download it?"

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"The pre-update is complete: the second dust of history is officially installed on 7.5, so stay tuned!"

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Finally, I would like to thank the lord of [I Can't Hear Qin Yu].

Still asking for a monthly pass!

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