I Made the Myth Template

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When I just graduated from university, I was directly thrown to the construction site in the wild mountains and forests to work, and I received a salary of less than 5,000 yuan a month, which directly gave me a whole life of doubt.

But this book did give me another way out.

Even if I choose to leave the construction site in the future, I will not starve to death and can barely make ends meet.

Only after graduation can I truly realize the gap between people. My school is also considered to be ok, with a medium level of 211. After graduation, some students go to study abroad at their own expense. Going to school is like traveling without pressure. Some people encounter a company that signs a tax deduction for fresh college students, and they are fired as soon as the internship period is over. Some people fail the postgraduate entrance examination after graduating from World War II, and so on.

In fact, for most people, life is actually just a few ways.

Junior high school, high school, university entrance examination or directly looking for a job, even if there are many bad things, you can only endure it silently.

But I really found a new way out in the current social environment through writing and through this hobby that I persisted in my college days.

So I am very grateful to those readers and friends who support the genuine edition. It is precisely because of your existence that the online literature industry has been able to develop to the present after 20 years of ups and downs, and it has become more and more prosperous, and many good works have been born.

And then I would like to thank my parents. It was because my father liked to read martial arts online novels that I gradually fell in love with this industry.

I clearly remember that the first book I read was Killing God Against Heaven. I should have just entered junior high school at that time.

Because I am a left-behind child, my mother bought me a student computer before leaving home for work, and then I downloaded a huge amount of web articles on that computer. In the three years of junior high school, I almost ditched the relatively well-known websites on the internet. The text was read back and forth. Every day after school, I see from five or six o'clock to one or two o'clock in the evening.

Thinking about it now, that time was really the most free, carefree and happiest time in my life.

What's more interesting is that my grandfather always thought I was studying in the bedroom, and he was very distressed.

Until now, when he and I chatted, he would say what would have happened if he had studied so hard in junior high school. I don't know if the old man will beat me when he finds out about this.

My parents have been very supportive of me since I started writing books in college until now.

They also read my books, and sometimes put forward some opinions from the perspective of readers. Compared with those authors who are regarded as unprofessional and have conflicts with their family because of their writing, this is really rare for me.

Then I would like to thank my editor Lu Mingda, who gave me a lot of recommendations, and gave me very important advice and help when opening a new book.

Lu Ming, he really does not rest day and night for 365 days, he is really dedicated!

Then review the shortcomings and inadequacies of the book.

If I were to write a novel, the first step would be to consider his subject matter, then I would think about the sense of expectation based on the subject matter and continue to develop the main line, and then interspersed with various characters in the main plot. The framework of such a small book is basically the same.

The progress of this book lies in the judgment of the subject matter and the grasp of the main line of refreshing points.

But there are too many shortcomings.

The biggest problem is the lack of coherence between the plots, the plot of the template and the plot of the protagonist are separated from each other, and the sense of substitution is reduced.

There are repetitions in the writing of the plot between the templates and the templates, and it will feel very boring to read.

The long-term anticipation has not been shaped, and the sense of oppression from aliens and the crazy social structure in the apocalypse have not been portrayed at all.

The characters and plots are not well polished, and some lines and plots appear abrupt when they appear. Including the personality between templates, it has not been successfully shaped, including my favorite two female templates, Kamiya and Liu Qingqing, and the personality changes before and after are a bit stiff.

There are also many emotional expressions in the writing that make people feel more abrupt.

When I first released this book, I felt that my writing was not bad, but when I wrote it later, I gradually felt that many things were beyond my control.

But fortunately, this book is still an improvement compared to the previous book in terms of performance and plot.

I can allow myself to walk slowly, but I must ensure that I continue to learn new things, reflect on my shortcomings, and make sure that I am moving forward.

After summarizing my mistakes, the goal of the next book becomes clear.

1. There must be a complete outline. This outline can be a simple story, but the short and medium lines must have plot goals and external dilemmas.

2. The bedding between cool points and people should be better. When writing the first paragraph of the plot, you must consciously ambush for the subsequent plot, and maintain the rhythm and sense of expectation. For example, I was a relatively mediocre student in my class, and the school suddenly wanted to hold a math competition. When I was describing this plot, the goal of the competition was to select a national modeling competition. While sticking to the main line, you must have a solid understanding of the follow-up plot, so that you can be confident when writing.

Then there is a sense of anticipation and a different writing style.

The writing method of this book is too simple, which leads to the boring follow-up plot, the follow-up has been declining, and then there are a few more plots that deviate from the main line of the avalanche.

3. There is nothing to say about the supporting role of the tool man.

But if it is the main character, in the next book, I must write in detail about his appearance, past experience, social status, life goals, personality characteristics, etc. These elements should be in harmony with each other. He has such character traits and life goals because of his past experiences and growth environment. He can dig out the growth of the characters in the plot. Simply because of simple conflicts of interest but more complex gaps in goals and philosophies. It is not easy to do this, but if it can be written well, it will definitely leave a deeper impact on readers. For example, Old Neil, Captain and so on in Lord of Mysteries.

The imagery of the template in this book is too simple, and it neither reflects the growth and changes of the characters well, nor does it have too distinct personalities, which is really a pity.

4. Writing

Web novels don't actually place much emphasis on writing. However, the lyricism, the lines and behaviors of the supporting characters, and the development of the plot should be as logical as possible and not abrupt. I originally thought this was a basic skill, but then I found out that it was actually very difficult. Not only did I fail to do it, but most of the novels on the market actually failed to do this. Some of the plots really made my scalp tingle.

5. More diverse popular elements

This book is labeled as a behind-the-scenes handwriting, but to be honest, it is really not well written.

I was in a dangerous environment, wretched development. Pretend to be a master through some channel, and the supporting characters use some clues to make up their minds crazy, and all living beings are transformed. In this case, slowly achieve your goals. This way of writing is much more difficult to write than ordinary upgrade essays, but if you can write it well, you can pretend it twice, once in front of the younger brother, and once in front of the opponent. It's cool and interesting.

Of course, there's more than just a behind-the-scenes element that's been trending lately. There are many popular elements including Dihua, anti-routine, involution, chat groups, social death, etc., but it is not easy to integrate these elements into your own plot perfectly and coherently.

6. Worldview.

The worldview does not mention innovation, at least it must complement the current development of the plot. The development of the plot promotes changes in the world view, and the dramatic changes in the world line bring foreshadowing and expectations for the plot. In this book, the world line and the main storyline seem to be a bit disconnected. The things the templates do cannot have a too obvious impact on the protagonist Su Heng. It is also a terrible thing to reflect the incoherence and lack of expectation in the plot.

I feel that a good book should be able to accommodate the plot, characters, and worldview. When introducing new content, the other two should also be able to continue to maintain, there is a kind of inertia of reading, which is more difficult, and I haven't figured out a specific method for the time being.

All in all, UU reading www.uukanshu.com In my opinion, the most essential thing in anything must be simple and clear.

If one thing is too complicated to think about, then it is very likely that there is a problem with my own thinking, including so many things I have summarized now, when I write this book, it may be another set of thinking. All in all, read more, write more, and summarize more, there will always be progress.

The next book is not unexpected, it should be a type of myth recovery combined with the Classic of Mountains and Seas.

Both the plot and the characters should be improved compared to this book. If you are interested, you can go and see it.

Bomb sister, thank you!

—May 3, 2022

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