Fox in the Penalty Area

The first volume was finally written. I took a look at the number of words counted in WORD, excluding 697,860 characters in spaces, and nearly 700,000 words.

I did intend to write campus articles in detail at first, but I did not expect that there would be so many words in the end.

In fact, this campus article is not a complete campus article. After all, many campus life scenes are missing, and there is relatively little account of Hu Lai's campus life except football.

But there is no way, if that's the case, I estimate one million words to stop.

Broad, but not necessary.

Because this is not a campus-only book, after all, if I want to write a campus alone, I should open a new book instead of doing it in this book.

Therefore, according to my plan, with the two national competitions as the main line, write the complete development of Hu Lai on the campus, even if the goal is achieved.

Next is the chapter of professional football, which is also the highlight of this book.

I will also try to show you a completely overhead world in the next story-to be honest, I don’t have much confidence now, I don’t know if I can make everyone satisfied, but I will try to try. I know this is very difficult, very difficult, because more than one time in the feedback, I saw the comment of "overhead? No sense of substitution".

But I still want to try it.

Like Hu Lai, I don’t know if my career will succeed, but I have to try it? How do you know if you don’t try?

As for why the campus chapter as a novice village should be written so long, I explained it in Chapter 49, "The Gate to the New World", and I will not repeat it here.

In short, after I finished writing, I looked back at the first volume, and felt that it was quite successful to write Hu Lai as a player's start.

From a rookie who was ridiculed and ridiculed, he could grow little by little into an opponent who could break the wrist with a strong enemy or even be chased by a strong enemy. I wrote this process.

The next chapter is professional football.

At the end of the first volume, I used the words of Hu Lai's father and Li Ziqiang to tell Hu Lai the risks of professional football. This actually represents a part of my opinion-I don’t want to write this book as a kind of idea that only relies on the blood of the second middle school, I can ignore the problems of the facts, and forcefully render the words "dream invincible" and "the dream is amazing". story.

Perhaps it is because of the older age, after seeing many helplessness in society, is it more realistic?

Dreams are really great, but dreams also need to be on the ground to take root. And how easy is it to get to the ground? If the dream is so easy to realize, what is the value of the dream?

I did not write the first volume as Hu Lai persuaded his father by his own championship and performance in three words, let him agree to take the path of professional football, the last family and peace, all are happy, hello everyone Well, it is also for this reason-unrealistic, impossible, childish play.

After all, I am now also a father of a seven-year-old child. I can understand how much I feel as a father.

It's not easy for an adult whose three views have been fixed to be persuaded. I haven't seen it on Weibo in recent years...

Not to mention that the person who tried to persuade him was still his own son, a character who naturally "what do you know?"

His own experience also makes him not believe his son's vision and expectation of the future, but only treats those as childish and naive illusions and disdains from the heart.

At the same time, as a father with a strong desire to control, he will naturally react very violently when his son draws against his control.

I know that writing a quarrel between father and son, so hard to portray a character standing on the opposite side of the protagonist, is not very laborious, and it will arouse many people's disgust.

But I still wrote that way, because Hu Lixin is a character I really want to portray. I don’t care if the character I portrayed is flattering-his role is not for flattering-I care whether this person is real, and whether it represents a part of such a person, placed in the world of Hu Lai Whether it is a living person with his own thinking.

By the way, Li Ziqiang is also such a character, and he did not write it for flattering, so I did not deliberately portray him toward a positive image, which caused everyone to have a lot of disgust with him, and it is normal.

Returning to Hu Lixin, I can even say that the focus and hidden main line in the first half of this book are the grievances between father and son. It is about how an inferior and sensitive father confronts his son and a long-term How did the father's greasy son get along with such a father.

There is a lyrics in Li Zongsheng's "Newly Written Old Songs" that made me feel particularly:

"Two men are very likely to only look like their whole lives. Fortunately, they become confidants, and unfortunately, they can only be A and B."

I was thinking about Hu Lixin and Hu Lai, will it become like this?

What should I do if I don't want to fall into this cycle?

In fact, in the domestic chapter of the professional league, Hu Lai and Hu Lixin will be gradually untied, after all, there is still a career line between the two.

But it is not simply to solve happy knots through career success.

I can’t spoil now. I can only say that I didn’t have a long time after I opened the book, and I already thought about the plot between the father and the son to reach a certain reconciliation. Even the chapter name of the specific chapter I’ve got up, just wait until It's time to use.

That was a big climax in my mind, and it was a scene scene I repeatedly sketched in my mind.

I look forward to writing it out for everyone to see.

Even when the book was just released and the grades were not good, what supported me was that I wanted to show you the picture, the story, and the chapter title.

Okay, so much about the first volume, next is the testimonial.

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This is a late testimonial.

According to the convention, every book should have a testimonial when it is listed in V.

Every book before me has such a testimonial.

But this book does not.

Why not?

In fact, before the book is on the shelf, I really intend to use the testimonials on the shelf to chat with you.

But reality is always full of surprises.

On the day of the launch, on the morning of May 1st, I just turned on the computer, and the hivi speaker that had been in service for eight years suddenly issued a continuous piercing high-frequency electronic whistle, which scared my wife who had not yet got up.

But after repeatedly restarting and powering off several times, I can only helplessly admit that this speaker is completely broken. I have to buy a new speaker.

In fact, it is not a big deal to buy a speaker. If Jingdong orders it in the morning, it will arrive in the afternoon, and I will definitely get it on the next day at the latest.

But it was like an ominous omen, as if the army was about to open up, but suddenly a demon wind blew the flagpole...

After my book was put on the shelf, my grades were not good-looking, and I can even describe it as "worrying".

Although I said before I opened the book that I didn't care much about my grades, would I still be angry if my grades were good?

In particular, the data of the public version of this book-collections, recommended votes, and the number of chapters-all look pretty good. It seems to indicate that everyone’s acceptance of my attempt is good. The results after the shelf are worthwhile. look forward to.

It was under such a psychological expectation that the subscription score of the first chapter of the new book gave me a head start.

The number I saw at first glance was a little over a thousand.

Later, at twenty-four hours, I took another look, a little over 1,500.

When was the last time I scored so poorly in my new book? Prior to this, the worst performance of the "Championship" in all my books was not known. Is this low? Maybe?

Even if I am mentally prepared, I expect that this book's grades will definitely be worse than those of my previous books, but I did not expect it to be so bad.

Twenty-five hours first order for five thousand...

I began to doubt my previous confident thoughts.

Did I write it well enough?

Is my aerial idea wrong from the beginning?

Is my rhythm too slow?

Did I have a problem controlling some plots?

is not it……

I have a lot of thoughts, and my heart is in chaos.

There are some people who ridicule and say that I don’t know how high and thick I want to get rid of the reality football. I really don’t know how many pounds I have. I really think that my achievements and popularity over the years are all brought to me by myself?

Some people also left a message in the book review area to ask me as a platinum author, even if the boutique did not arrive, is it shameful or not?

In short, the whole day on the shelves on May 1st, I was muddled, and my mood fell to the lowest point.

Naturally, I was not in a mood to write any testimonials.

In the face of such a dismal result, what other comments do you have? What can you say?

It wasn't until an author friend who was listed with me at the same time the next day asked me about my grades. I didn't know that many of the authors listed in this issue were far below their expectations and estimates.

As we all know that something happened at the time, we don’t know if this is because of the impact of this thing.

It took a long time for me to know that this is the case in every new book released since this year. The public version of the score looks very good. As a result, the book and the author’s own expectation were cut in half. Is there any free reading here? And the impact of piracy is unknown to me.

At that time, the author and I could only choose to comfort each other.

I said to him: "Don't worry about the grades, just calm down and write a good book. Since the grades are like this, then there is only one thing left to do is to write a good book."

He agreed.

But I quickly realized a problem: "However, with such an achievement, how can we prove that what we think is a "good book" will be able to write a "good book"?"

The author friend also froze for a long time and sighed: "That's what I said. I always feel that I have written very well. I wrote it myself very happy and passionate, but the feedback on the results after I came out But told me that's not the case..."

This is a terrible thing for us, that is, when the writing ideas, skills, and experience I rely on trust are not recognized, when I think that "good" is no longer "good", I How do you keep writing down? What do I use to convince myself that I am really writing about "good" instead of writing blindly?

I have no answer.

I also thought about whether to speed up the rhythm and write the rest according to the rhythm of the cool text?

Soon I rejected this idea, because it would not make this book better, but it would make this book nondescript.

Later, the new speaker arrived, tossed it to connect to the computer, turned on the music player, listened to the songs that my codeword must listen to, and tried to calm down my emotions.

I told myself that since my grades were like this, anyway, I didn’t know if my good writing was really good, so I still wrote this book according to the original plan and rhythm.

Even if this book does not have a good grade, at least I can finish the story in my heart and those words completely, leaving such a story, it is an explanation for myself.

My only worry is that because my grades are too bad, I will not see the starting point and let me finish the book ahead of time.

But my editor-in-chief, Chang Tian, ​​is a good person. He is actively helping me to promote the copyright adaptation of this book. I hope this can alleviate the regret of the unsatisfactory results of electronic subscriptions. Finish this statement early.

Therefore, since there are no worries about finishing the book ahead of time, I will write it according to my definition of "write it well".

I wrote the first national competition of Hu Lai according to the plan and the existing rhythm. Without writing his first national competition, he won the championship and then flew to the sky. According to the original plan Luo Kai went to the professional team, Hu Lai stayed in the high school team.

Writing Hu Lai's sophomore year, after some hard training, he can provoke girders and become the team's leading shooter. Write him killing the Quartet in the Anton Cup, showing the results of his hard training.

Write him to participate in the second national competition. According to my outline, he reached the final all the way, became the national champion, broke the three consecutive championship dreams of Dawn High School, and also defeated Chen Xingli.

Writing that even if he won these championships and honors, he could not change the contradiction and relationship between him and his father. In the end, he could only choose to leave without a word, and run away from home to continue to pursue his dream.

There is no chapter here because I was worried about my grades and changed my original plan. It can basically be said that I finished the campus chapter completely in accordance with my original idea.

I don’t look at subscription results anymore. I open the author’s background every day just to upload new chapters or modify typos in old chapters.

Why are the grades bad?

I don’t know, and I don’t want to study. There may be a reason for the big environment, or maybe I have my own problem: maybe because I chose such a niche way of writing in a niche theme, or it may be because my early rhythm is too slow and my emotions are too depressed, The protagonist is too stubborn...

It may be caused by one of these reasons, or it may be the result of a combination of all factors.

In short, the grades are like this. I love what I do. I just write my book and use it as a stand-alone machine. Just write the stories in my heart.

Under such circumstances, the starting point gave me a big referral, and then I realized that the score of this book has been slowly rising...I am about to reach the boutique line.

From the first order of one thousand five, the average order is one thousand two, which has gradually increased to the current average order of three thousand, and the high order is also four thousand.

And there is one more point-the book's maximum and average numbers are not far from each other, that is, hundreds.

What does this mean?

Explain that although there are not many people who read books, the readers who followed the V subscription together did not lose much. They all stayed and have been chasing more!

This is a great encouragement to me.

I don’t know if the people in front of the screen can understand my feelings at that time. It’s like walking alone in the darkness with my head down, and then I was surprised to find that there were many people walking with me by the slight glimmer of the sky!

Then on the second day of Dafeng's push, Hu Lai's stories all crossed the 3000 line and entered the boutique channel of the starting point.

It was then that I thought that I would write a testimonial to share with you and share my thoughts on the past two months.

Now it seems that a platinum author is so excited to say that his book has passed the boutique line, which is quite a thing.

But after two months, I think I still have reason to be proud of my current results.

I uphold my original intention, I am so slow-paced, every day I can't move, I write, the results have improved a little bit?

This book almost sentenced to death, UU reading www.uukanshu.com seems to breathe again?

I don't know if there is any reason why this result will not be terminated in advance from the perspective of website management.

I don't know how shameful this result actually looks in the eyes of others.

But anyway, I am very happy, I am very satisfied.

I finished the first volume of this book in its entirety, and it was a reward for me to have such achievements at the end of writing.

I gladly accepted it and accepted it calmly.

The above are the testimonials for the late arrival of this book. I will continue to adhere to my original intention to write this story. , Write a world.

Again, thank you for keeping this book in order, thank you for your support, and thank you for witnessing the growth of Hu Lai and the birth of this world.

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