Fantasy System

Chapter 468: A New Ending

The Fantasy System of Two Dimensions 468 The author of Silver Flash Wind has a total of 3438 words

"Qianshou Cunzheng actually surrendered on his own initiative?" Seeing Qianshou Cunzheng's serious expression, Mu Fan was slightly startled. It is enough to prove how wonderful the script written by the senior sister is to let the genius light novel girl Senshou Murakami take the initiative to admit defeat. And after the plot of "Metamorphosis" was played, the entire venue was silent for about a minute before the judges recovered from the comic plot just now, and then pressed the scorers in their hands. At the same time, five scores appeared one after another on the big screen. 91 points, 94 points, 96 points, 92 points, 97 points - Seeing these scores, Mu Fan's heart beat faster, because in his calculations, the average score of this work has surpassed that of Qianshou Village Zheng script! Because the rules of the competition are to remove the highest score and the lowest score to select the average score, seeing the final result, the host's voice became high-pitched, and laughed loudly: "I didn't expect that the last work would not surprise us all." Disappointed, the highest score is 97 points, the lowest score is 91 points, and the average score of "Metamorphosis" is 94 points—" "Let's congratulate the short comic "Metamorphosis" drawn by Eri Kashiwagi, Twilight Fanchen, and written by Xia Shizi for this award. First place at this comic festival." Hearing the voice announcing their victory, Mu Fan's heart became completely agitated at this moment. She really deserves to be a senior who has read countless famous novels and books. The plot written by the senior has potential and also contains a deep meaning of life, so she directly won the first place in this competition! "Great!" Ying Lili on the side shouted even more excitedly, and seeing Mu Fan who turned around, she couldn't help but threw herself into Mu Fan's arms, and said excitedly: "Mu Fan, Mu Fan , our manga finally won the first place, we didn't work hard these days in vain, it's great! Great!" As she spoke, Ying Lili burst into tears, rubbing her head against Mu Fan's chest, tears streaming down her cheeks. Mu Fan's clothes were wet. Mu Fan couldn't help touching Ying Lili's hair with some distress. These days, Ying Lili has been working hard for her senior sister, and even hasn't slept well these few nights. In fact, the senior sister's success is not due to her alone, but also depends on Ying Lili's painting skills, which fully reveals Ichinose Ume's character, demeanor and behavior, making the character of Ichinose Ume more lifelike. It was only in everyone's memories that the beautiful expressions of the five Ichinose rains appeared. From the perspective of the plot, the plot written by the senior sister is naturally impeccable, but the exquisite success of the comics should be attributed to Ying Lili. As for him, he also has a great role, one is as Ying Lili's assistant, and the other is that without his cooking, the two girls have long since starved to death, how could it be possible to write such a comic? Standing in front of the seat, watching the score on the big screen that was two points higher than her script, Senju Murasagi smiled in relief. In fact, when seeing Xia Shizi write such a plot, Qianshou Cunzheng understood that she had failed. Although she has always been hailed as the youngest genius of Dengeki Bunko, possessing the greatest brain and imagination of Dengeki Bunko, she is only a junior high school student, and there is still a long way to go for light novels in the future. learned. Although her understanding of full-length light novels is impeccable, short stories have always been her flaw compared to long-form plots. Her understanding of short-story plots is not deep enough, which is why she lost to Xia Shizi. But in any case, Kasumi Shiko's short story plot attainments are stronger than hers. Senshou Murakami feels that if Xia Shizi can bravely overcome the difficulties she faces this time, she will definitely become the one with the highest ranking in Dengeki Bunko in the future. enemy. Of course, Senju Murakami is not jealous of Kasumi Shiko, but is pleased, and hopes that Kasumigaoka Shiwa can get out of the predicament, return to Dengeki Bunko, and become friends with her. The audience in the audience and the cartoonist heard the final result without any objection, on the contrary, they agreed with it very much. Although the author belongs to Xia Shizi, no matter from which point of view, comparing the plots of Qianshou Village Zheng and Xia Shizi, they are more inclined to write the story of the difficult life of a light novel writer with the simplest plot like Xia Shizi .

Even the most bluntly wrote about their life, telling them that only by persevering will they be happy. "By the way, is Xia Shizi really writing the script this time?" "She was able to write such a good script. It seems that we have to go back and read her "Love Metronome" and "Magic Academy Love" carefully. Guide." "How could such a talented author make such a low-level mistake in the "Guide to Love at the Academy of Magic"?" There was a moment of silence, and the entire venue was filled with discussions from the audience. They don't understand the reason, and they don't know why Xia Shizi has such a high attainment in light novels, but why she still writes such a low-IQ plot, which is circulated on the Internet and is abused by others. At this time, the senior cartoonist just pushed his glasses and said with a smile: "It may be that Xia Shizi encountered some difficulties some time ago. As a cartoonist, I can also understand the writer's mentality. Once the mentality is affected, the plot of the novel will also be affected." Be affected accordingly." Hearing this, some viewers nodded in agreement, what the cartoonist said is indeed reasonable, and mentality can indeed affect the quality of a work. With a good attitude, even if the beginning of this work is not exciting enough, the following plot will still attract people. It was just one mistake of Xia Shizi that caused such a serious phenomenon, and the audience who loved her writing "Metamorphosis" felt a little sorry for such a talented high school student. At this moment, a gentle female voice came from the corner: "Just now I took a picture of the story written by Xia Shizi. Let's all take out our mobile phones to forward the live broadcast of today's comic festival, and justify Xia Shizi's name?" Hearing this voice, several audience members turned their heads and saw a beautiful girl sitting in the corner. The girl was wearing a simple beige dress, with long chestnut-colored hair hanging down her shoulders, shining under the lights of the venue. The sparkling luster, and the smile on the young girl's pretty face without any impurities at this time, couldn't help but stunned the audience. "This... this is not, form..." Recalling the eldest lady who occasionally appeared in the news, several people recognized the girl's name in front of them, and were about to exclaim, the girl blinked the amber Mouzi took out her mobile phone and said with a smile: "Let's help Xia Shizi rectify her name!"...Mu Fan and Ying Lili sitting in the front row didn't know what happened in the auditorium. But the man held the microphone and said with a smile: "I really thank the three teachers who wrote "Metamorphosis" for bringing us such a beautiful story. Teacher Fan Chen and Teacher Xia Shizi, come on stage to accept the award." After the host finished speaking, there was a burst of warm applause from the audience, everyone applauded from the bottom of their hearts for the work "Metamorphosis", so the whole The applause of the venue was deafening like thunder. Seeing the enthusiastic faces of the audience, the host announced that he had come to the stage to receive the award. He won the first place in the comic festival. At least he should go to receive a medal and bring it back so that he could face his senior. Mu Fan could only stand up Come on, look at Ying Lili on the left: "Ying Lili, let's go on stage." Ying Lili pushed Mu Fan directly, and said with a disgusted face: "I don't want it, do you want everyone in the world to know Am I Eri Kashiwagi? Come on stage, remember not to look at me on stage, I am not with you!" "Then go back and go by yourself, don't take my motorcycle!" Mu Fan was worried about revealing his identity. Ying Lili glanced at her and saw that she could only walk onto the stage alone. Standing on the stage, thousands of eyes from the audience of thousands of audiences all focused on him, and Mu Fan felt a little uncomfortable. As an otaku, he has a bit of crowd phobia. So many people and an unknown number of viewers in front of the TV are watching him at this moment, which makes him feel tense all of a sudden. The host saw Mu Fan approaching, took the microphone and asked in surprise, "Excuse me, are you Teacher Kashiwagi Eri?" Mu Fan took the microphone and said, "No, I am Twilight Fanchen, as for Kashiwagi Eri... Neither she nor Teacher Xia Shizi came to the venue, so this time I can only accept the award by myself." Just halfway through the speech, Mu Fan suddenly saw Ying Lili gritted her teeth and glared at him from the audience. He could only swallow back the words he was about to say. Well, Ying Lili doesn't intend to reveal her identity, so he better not expose it, otherwise it won't be fun for the eldest lady to run away in front of her. "Oh, that's it." The host didn't ask much, so he just opened the box, handed the medal inside to Mu Fan, and asked with a smile: "Mr. Mu Hui Fanchen, I have heard that you have written two classic light novels." Fiction is already a hot presence in the ACGN world, and now it has won the Comic Con, do you have anything to say?" Can I say that I just want to step down now? Can't you hostesses who know how to watch words and moods see that I'm nervous now? Mu Fan stood helplessly on the stage, but after thinking about it, he suddenly thought of his senior, gritted his teeth and mustered up his courage, and said seriously: "With the hard work of me, Kashiwagi Eri and Xia Shizi, I can get this I was moved from the bottom of my heart because it proved that the efforts of the three of us were not in vain, and everyone recognized our success...." After saying some polite words, Mu Fan suddenly The topic changed: "However... Although it is rude to change the plot of other people's comics, I still want to give this comic an ending." "The ending?" Hearing Mu Fan's words, the host Wei Wei After being stunned for a moment, there was a burst of exclamation from the audience.

The audience couldn't help but wonder, how does this well-known writer plan to modify the plot? The host took the lead with the microphone, looked at Mu Fan and asked the question that the audience wanted to ask: "In our opinion, the ending of this comic is already perfect. One, what kind of ending do you plan to give it?"

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