Fantasy System

The Fantasy System of Two Dimensions 460 Author Silver Flash Wind Full text count 3095 words

"The story is about an author who used to write manga plots and turned to become a light novel writer. Although he had some success in writing light novels at the beginning, he failed later and was taken in by his companions. Finally, he helped his companions get a prize at the comic festival. The number one ranking, do you understand the direction of your writing?" In the spacious and bright living room, Ying Lili, who was sitting on the sofa, held the manuscript in her hand, looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu with disdain and asked: "Are you sure this is not The true portrayal of your heart?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu brushed her long hair, stood in front of Ying Lili, and said calmly: "Only a brain circuit like Sawamura will think it is a portrayal of my heart. The plot of the anime and The reality is different, do you look the same as Ellie, are you really that Ellie who is loved by her father all day long?" "You!" Ying Lili slapped the table angrily and stood up, humming dissatisfied He said: "I thought you Xia Shizi would write what kind of plot, but I didn't expect it to be such a simple plot? How can such a plot compare to Qianshou Village Zheng's short stories?" "It's better than someone who can even write Don’t come out, okay?” Xiazhiqiu Shiyu retorted displeased. "At any rate, I do some research on original plots. I can also write plots like yours!" Ying Lili raised her waist in displeasure. This time Mu Fan did not refute Ying Lili, but put down the manuscript and said seriously: "Indeed, it seems that it is a bit difficult to win the Qianshou village levy with only such a plot." If it is a plot that can be made into a short comic, Mu Fan's memory There are many in it, such as "Your Name" and "The Shape of a Voice" in the previous life are very good plots, but this time he did not choose to write these plots. "Because, copying books may not always be the first, only being strong is king. It is true that in that world, perhaps the scripts of Makoto Shinkai and Hayao Miyazaki were almost impeccable. I want to cry and feel deeply, but I can't say that they are very good. In such a parallel world, no one can surpass him. Not to mention others, the bald Wu Ke from the B1 production team they once knew may be Write a good script. Just like "Accelerating the World" and "Blessings for a Beautiful World" copied by Mu Fan, although the sales are good, there are still some difficulties in surpassing the Qianshou Village Levy. Maybe, the Qianshou Village Levy In such a world, it is not impossible to write a short story that surpasses Makoto Shinkai. But Kasumigaoka Shiwa has really reached this point with her own talent. After entering the university, she has great strength and potential in writing novels. That's why Mu Fan decided that he would not participate in the modification of comic scripts, and the whole plot would be in charge of the entire plot by the senior sister alone. After speaking, Mu Fan smiled again and added: "I guess that's not the only plot of senior sister's comics, right? "Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes lit up, and she leaned in front of Mu Fan, narrowed her long and beautiful eyes, her hair hung down on her shoulders, stared into Mu Fan's eyes, and said with a light smile: "You really deserve to be a junior, you can see all of this It came out, yes, this is just an outline, the real plot needs to be written by filling in the outline, and the simplicity of short stories lies in the fact that they don’t need so many sub-plots to fill in, as long as the main line is integrated, with meaningful writing and sentences to let People can be moved and remembered. "The gentle and elegant voice shook Mu Fan's spirit. When he raised his head, he saw the senior's face approaching. Mu Fan found that the senior's face was very delicate. The snowy face did not contain any impurities. It was fresh, refined and beautiful. Peerless. Because the senior sister looked down at her sitting on the chair, a few strands of soft hair happened to fall on the tip of Mu Fan's nose, and the fragrance of a girl mixed in the hair made Mu Fan's heart beat involuntarily. Speeding up, his face was reddish and he lowered his head, but happened to see the two peaks of the senior sister who were wearing tight clothes, and even under the cover of underwear, he could still see the corner of the perfect silhouette from a bird's-eye view. Snow-white color. Seeing Mu Fan not speaking for a long time, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu blinked his eyes in astonishment, lowered his head, and realized what Mu Fan just saw.

A blush flushed on her pretty face, and she scolded: "Schoolboy, you're lustful..." Hearing this, Mu Fan coughed in embarrassment. To be reasonable, what happened just now was completely force majeure, but no matter what he said He watched it too, and no matter how he explained it, he couldn't change the fact. He could only smile apologetically, and changed the subject: "Sister, we only have four days left, let's talk about the new plot! This time If the short manga wins the first place, it has a chance to be made into a movie." Ying Lili, who was a little displeased when she saw Kasumigaoka Shiyu approaching Mu Fan, immediately complied and urged: "That's right, let's tell the story quickly. Us." Seeing that Mu Fan didn't want to continue the topic just now, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu could only take out another stack of printed manuscripts from the cabinet and put them on the table: "This is the whole plot of the short light novel manga .” Since time was tight, Mu Fan and Ying Lili read it carefully. In Mu Fan's opinion, the whole plot is much more exciting than the outline. After all, the outline is only an overview of the plot. The same outline will be written in two completely different styles in the hands of a master author and an ordinary author. And charm, this is the gap between authors. Kasumigaoka Shiwa wrote about a man and a woman who grew up together [Mu Fan] and [Pear], the text author [Ichinose Ume] who contributed to the manga festival together, and finally failed in the selection finals of the manga festival and won the second place. A story with a famous ending. Because of the failure, the readers of the online manga who originally had expectations for the trio saw the unanimous discussion on the Internet that there was a problem with the text of the novel, and left them regardless of Mufan and Riko's persuasion. Half a month later, Amay Ichinose contributed to Dengeki Bunko and became the author of Dengeki Bunko. Although the first book had achieved some results, she couldn't figure out how to write the second book because of the high expectations on the Internet. . Helpless, she met her former companion again, hoping that she could return to the studio to re-write the manga together, and told her that she always believed in her text and never resented her because of the failure last time. But Yu Ichinose has no intention of going back, and intends to use light novels to prove her talent and strength. After the first book was finished, she has been looking for a way to write the second book. She read the comments on the Internet, sorted out the mistakes of the previous book, and wrote according to the way readers think and the way others expect The second book was published, but it failed in the end, and even all the readers who loved her changed from loving her to hating her, and even the editors no longer paid attention to her. Ichinose Ume's heart fell from the highest expectation point in an instant after being devastated by the readers from the previous expectation for the second book, and turned into the greatest disappointment. At this moment, she remembered a few years ago, her companion's failure at the comic festival and the satire on the Internet. She felt disheartened and felt that the writing she only knew had betrayed her, so she hid in her room for a few days and decided to jump into the river He wanted to end his useless life, but it happened that his companion was going to look for her at this moment, but after seeing this scene, he jumped into the deep water river desperately to rescue her. What follows is a very inspirational plot. With the guidance and persuasion of the companions, as well as a few side-by-side and happy stories, Ichinose Yu decided to help the companions fulfill their wishes, and began to carefully write a short text. , because the manga festival was about to start, Ichinose Yu hadn't slept for three days and finally finished writing the text before the manga festival, and the three of them worked together for another three days to finally complete the short manga. And they also defeated the team that defeated them last time and won the first place in one fell swoop. Ichinose Yu, who finally won the best text, said in the interview that she wanted to be the first in the comic festival. Only then did she understand the importance of her partners, and with the company of her never-ending partners, she succeeded, because she was no longer alone. Inspirational story. Moreover, when interviewing the male companion, the male companion said that the reason why he helped Ichinose Ume was because his relatives and friends who wanted to become a manga artist did not support him when he was a child. Let him come this far, and he also wants to fulfill Ichinose Yu's ideal at this time. Hearing this, Ichinose Yu was moved to tears, and finally mustered up the courage to confess to her boyfriend who had been helping her in the interview. The male companion also extended his hand to her: "I have been in love with you since I was a child..." In the end, the two came together because of love, and with the color of love that people yearn for, the story ends here It's over..."Wait!" After watching the whole plot, a dissatisfied cry came suddenly. Mu Fan and Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu turned their heads, and saw Ying Lili "slapped" the text on the table On the other hand, she gritted her teeth and stared at Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and said unhappily: "Isn't it a bit too much for you to be yummy? Originally, the three people in the studio, how can Ichinose Yu, who has been making troubles all the time, get it?" Love, that [Pear] who has been helping Mu Fan and Ichinose Ume in obscurity for a long time doesn't even have a few lines!"