Fantasy System

Seeing that Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was crying, Yinglili immediately regretted it, waved her hands hurriedly, and said incoherently: "You... don't cry, I just want to say that the sales of the book died suddenly for the first time, we can slowly Slowly modify the plot and work hard until the next volume..."

"Efforts are useless, because I can't find a way to write that suits my readers."

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked up at Ying Lili, and said in a low tone: "This light novel, I obviously wrote everything according to the normal method, obviously there is no mistake, but the sales have proved that everything about me has been written. The reader denied it, this kind of thing is not as easy as you think..."

Speaking of this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's tears had already wet the table in front of her, she picked up the bag on the table, and left the coffee shop with her head down.

Seeing Xiazhiqiu Shiyu leaving, Mu Fan and Ying Lili fell into silence, sitting in their seats, neither of them spoke.

At this time, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu would not listen to anyone's persuasion, and it would be better to let her quietly at this time.

Just now the meals ordered by Kasumigaoka Shiyu, Mu Fan and Yinglili were brought up by the maid, but after Kasumigaoka Shiyu’s commotion, even the hungry Yinglili lost her appetite and just drank a few sips of ice cream. Shui looked at Mu Fan and blamed himself, "Mu Fan, did I go too far just now..."

Mu Fan shook his head, forced a smile on his face, and comforted him: "Senior is not such a petty person, this matter is not your fault, and of course it is not my fault, but the problem lies in the grades in the book. Senior sister is different from the author who surpassed her, your Lord Silver Sparkle, your Lord Silver Sparkle belongs to the god who accumulates and grows from book to book and finds his own weaknesses to make up for it. Honed out that extraordinary him."

"Theoretically speaking, a god who writes a book and becomes a million-selling book is much stronger than a person who becomes a god with a book, both in his heart and in his understanding of light novels. But senior sister is different, She only stumbled to spread the name of [Xia Shizi] after the last book, so she became famous after one book, but just because of one book became famous, the pressure on the new book was even greater, her heart was not firm, and she never understood how the new book should be based on the book. What kind of form will be presented to everyone, and what should be done if the second book hits the street."

"It's hard to come up with a new subject, and sort out the mistakes of the previous book, and present it to everyone's favorites. In the end, a reader doesn't understand. The comments in the book review area are not bad, but after the book is published, No one bought the result of the sudden death of the sales volume, and the sales volume rejected her efforts by the readers, which made her feel more uncomfortable than directly rushing to the street."

Mu Fan knew that Ying Lili was a good girl, and although she often bickered with Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, the relationship between the two was very good because of the quarrel, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was not a stingy person,

Like Ying Lili, it is impossible to leave angrily because of a few words from the other party.

So in Mu Fan's view, what really caught the senior sister's attention was the issue of her new book.

In the final analysis, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu cared too much about readers' opinions and new books.

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Hearing what Mu Fan said, Ying Lili didn't have any surprised expression on her face, instead she said disappointedly: "This is the first time I've seen Xia Shizi like that, I hope she can cheer up sooner."

"Don't worry, senior sister is not such a self-destructive person, let's eat first."

Mu Fan smiled lightly and signaled Ying Lili to eat. After all, Ying Lili came to the coffee shop to prove that she was hungry. Thinking back to the team that lined up to buy games before, Mu Fan knew that Ying Lili might not even have breakfast.

Senior sister is sad and doesn't eat or drink alone, but she can't bring Ying Lili with her.

Of course, although Mu Fan comforted Ying Lili so much, Mu Fan knew in his heart that Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's heart was always much stronger than others, but this time the senior sister was really sad, and she was the kind whose heart died. I'm afraid it won't pass easily.

But Mufan forgot one thing, even he knew that Xiazhiqiu Shiyu would not recover so easily, how could Ying Lili, who has been dealing with Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, not understand Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's character?

In the coffee shop, both of them were not in a good mood. They just ate a little and left most of the food before going to pay the bill. Because Mu Fan and Ying Lili’s house was on the way, Mu Fan offered to help Ying Lili carry the food for the time being. Take the game equipment home together.

On the way, Yinglili's cell phone rang suddenly.

Ying Lili took out the phone and looked at it, then quickly typed a few words on the screen and replied, then took the phone back.

"What's matter?"

All the way back from Akihabara, Mu Fan couldn't help but feel a little embarrassed. It happened that Ying Lili took out his mobile phone this time, so he took the lead in finding a topic to ask Ying Lili.

Ying Lili put her phone back into her pocket, and said softly: "It's not an important thing. Half a month later, the Manga Festival will be held in Japan. I hope that all well-known cartoonists in the industry can create a short comic. In the selection at the comics festival, the first place will receive a trophy from the comics industry. Although I have been drawing books, I have the same avenues, and I am well-known in the comics industry, so the person in charge of the comics industry has always hoped that I can participate, but The comic festival needs original short comics, and you know that I don’t understand the original plot, so I plan to get familiar with the original plot before participating, and I’m not in a hurry for now.”

"That's it."

Mu Fan nodded. As a fan artist, Ying Lili has never been familiar with the original plot. Even "Father's Love Like a Mountain" also asked for his help. It is a good thing to understand her own shortcomings and find ways to make up for them.

It's just that the senior sister is different...

Because of the coffee shop, Mu Fan has always been thinking about Kasumigaoka Shiyu in his heart. On the first night, he went to bed after typing the words. On the second day, he logged on to the official website of Dengeki Bunko and read Kasumigaoka Shiyu's "Magic". The online version of College Love Guide, he was shocked to find that Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu hadn't updated it last night.

From "Love Metronome" to "Magic Academy Love Guide", Xia Shizi broke the update for the first time.

Seeing some doubts about the author's suspension of updates in the book review area, of course many people don't care about it. Authors also need to take a break, and they don't care if they take a break occasionally.

Mu Fan also felt that maybe the senior sister was in a bad mood yesterday and stopped working for a whole day.

It should be updated the next day, right?

But the next day, when Mu Fan opened the Dengeki Library and clicked on the "Guide to Love at the Academy of Magic", he found that the senior sister hadn't updated it yet.

After waiting for another day, on the third day, the senior finally updated, but Mu Fan was stunned when he opened it and saw the plot inside.

The senior sister seems to have received a big blow in her heart. Not to mention the typos in the new chapter, and the plot is even more worrying. It even wrote that the heroine left because she didn’t trust the hero, and the hero was drunk again. On the low-end plot of the female number three.

You know, Mu Fan has read "Love Guide to Magic Academy". , the male protagonist is not stupid, how could he go to the female third?

But it is true that such a heart-wrenching plot has been written, which has attracted countless readers to complain, and the book review area is almost scolded.

There are also a few authors in the author group who don't like him and Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu who have become great god-level authors at such a young age. They even took the opportunity to prepare to eliminate Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's godhead, and deliberately invited the navy to review comments.

The comments on the Internet are most afraid of someone taking the lead. Once they take the lead, someone will follow and scold. Because of the appearance of the troll, the scolding in the book review area can't be controlled immediately, and there are hundreds of comments every time it is refreshed.

Because the matter of Xiazhiqiu Shiyu became more and more troublesome, in the end, Mu Fan accidentally saw some comments on station c, and after clicking on it, he found that the latest chapter of this book was even used by the up masters of station c and other websites Comments, titled "The Most Mentally Retarded Light Novel Heroine in History", "A Guide to Love at the Academy of Magic Again Refreshes the IQ Lower Limit", "The Most Stupid-Looking Light Novel in History"

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In short, a series of titles emerged one after another, and within a day, the senior was hailed as the most mentally handicapped author of Dengeki Bunko, and some authors even claimed that Xia Shizi was not worthy of signing a contract for light novels like this.

"Senior sister is not worthy, but an author like you who is jealous of others is worthy. Instead of discussing others, it is better to use that time to develop yourself."

After Mu Fan appeared in the author group and recovered the author, he turned off the computer angrily.

Thinking of the crying senior sister that day, he lay on the bed a little tired, looking at the white ceiling and sighing in his heart, although this world is the era with the hottest ACG culture.

But it is precisely because it is too hot that a well-known Dengeki library writer like Kasumi Shiko once even wrote "Love Metronome", which was made into an anime. The authors tweeted hot comments.

In this era, cyber violence exists, and it is more terrifying than their era. I don't know if the senior sister can withstand this blow.

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Time passed quickly, and on the fourth day, Mu Fan clicked on the online version of "Guide to Love at the Academy of Magic".

It's not just Mu Fan, but at the same time, many readers, online ups, and authors are eager to try out new chapters or the author's explanations, and they find that there is no change in "Guide to Love at the Academy of Magic" today.

On the fifth day, there is no change in "Guide to Love at the Academy of Magic".

On the sixth day, there is no change in "Guide to Love at the Academy of Magic".

In the blink of an eye, it was already the seventh day, and Mu Fan looked at the online version of "Guide to Love at Magic Academy" with a serious expression, but there was still no movement in the latest chapter of the book... Read Web