Entertainment of Spring and Autumn

Chapter 444

"Qingwu would like to pay my respects to Master." Xiao Qingwu said with a sigh of relief on his chest, "I'm wearing armor, so it's inconvenient for me to salute Master. Please don't blame me."

Xue Mu almost stopped laughing: "Qingwu, you are becoming more and more interesting now, you can consider writing jokes."

"It's just because I'm facing Master." Xiao Qingwu secretly thought, "I even gave you my bellyband, so what else is there to be shy about? She is not so cheerful when facing others."

Xue Mu asked: "Are you here to hand in your homework?"

"Yes, I went to give Ji Qingyuan some routine treatment early in the morning, and now I'm here to see the master for review." Xiao Qingwu endured it for a long time, and finally couldn't bear it and took off Weiye who was rubbing against her chest endlessly, and took out a Rolling up the manuscript, he said carefully: "Master, please give me some advice..."

Xue Mu was shocked: "So many!"

"Ten, eighteen different looks, I wrote eighteen scenes."

"..." Xue Muru looked at the heavenly being: "Don't you know that you can put on eighteen different looks in one scene?"

Xiao Qingwu was confused: "Huh?"

Xue Mu hated the irony and taught: "What about the eighteen different forms and the thirty-six Sanshou? That's just a saying. As long as the general appearance is well written, that's the essence. Why do you want you to write eighteen different forms?"

Xiao Qingwu listened to the training dejectedly and secretly recorded his homework.

Xue Mu was reading the manuscript with Liu Wanxi in his arms. Although he said he hated iron, he was actually very happy in his heart. It was very interesting to read the little pornographic article written by this timid medical fairy.

The writing is quite good, but the scene structure is not well written, and there is no immersive feeling with just a few strokes, and it is a bit rigid. There's nothing you can do about it, you have to practice...

Then, the description of that incident is particularly interesting. It is full of serious medical terminology, has no facial expressions, no verbal communication, rigid descriptions of postures and movements, and even comments on which posture is easier to get pregnant.

No hint at all...

As he watched, a word suddenly flashed through Xue Mu's mind:

Physiological hygiene textbook!

"Wanxi, did you react after seeing it?"

"No, no..."

"If the reader has no reaction after reading it, this is a failed text." Xue Mu sighed, but still folded it uprightly and handed it back: "Keep it for yourself. You can refer to it when you read it again in the future."

These words once again had the meaning of true teaching. Xiao Qingwu put it away with a red face and said in a low voice: "Master, please give me some advice."

"Whether it is this kind of scene or a regular scene, the story must first be interesting. For example, this scene has a grape trellis. This is the unique and interesting point. If you don't show it, just talk about how to move under the grape trellis. Wouldn't it be a waste? ?”

Xiao Qingwu nodded as if he had some understanding, but wondered: "How to combine and utilize these, my disciple can't figure it out."

Weiye said, "Dad, why don't you write an article for your junior sister to read? Don't keep embarrassing my junior sister."

"You little thing."

Just do it, Xue Mu directly embraced Liu Wanxi, spread out a roll of paper and started writing a sample essay.

Liu Wanxi didn't even read the memorial. Over there, Xiao Qing, Wu Weiye and Ye Guying came over, stretching their heads to read the writings of "A Generation of Wen Zong".

Without even looking twice, Weiye couldn't bear it anymore and ran away covering her eyes. Not long after, Ye Guying also turned around and left silently. Xiao Qingwu was left with a blushing face, looking at him with shame, anger and admiration, wanting to leave but also want to learn.

Liu Wanxi in her arms had long since turned into a puddle of mud.

"Pan Jinlian Hanging the Grape Rack Upside Down", this classic scene can be immortalized... How has anyone from outside the world ever seen it?

I don't know how clever it is compared to Xiao Qingwu's physiological hygiene textbook.

Xue Mu threw the pen and waved his hand cheerfully: "Take it back and make a sample essay, and think about it carefully."

The air was very quiet, and after several breaths passed, Xiao Qingwu shrankly took the manuscript, not daring to look at it as if there were thorns on it, and quickly stuffed it into the small medicine bag.

Xue Mu leaned back on the chair comfortably: "Qingwu, your little schoolbag is quite cute..."

"Thank you, Master, for your advice. Qingwu went back to figure it out." Xiao Qingwu could no longer hear clearly what Xue Mu was saying, so he reluctantly saluted and fled through the door in a panic. When I got to the door, I was almost knocked down by the threshold. I hit my head and ran away with tears in my hands before I could even cry out the pain.

"Uh...did you use too much force?"

Liu Wanxi chuckled: "You accept someone as your apprentice and teach some real kung fu. Isn't this teasing too much..."

"To be honest, this sample essay was requested by them themselves. Ahem...although this one is particularly powerful..." Xue Mu scratched his head: "I'd better teach her something else next time. It's really not good."

Liu Wanxi murmured with charming eyes: "Who have you ever played with in such a powerful scene?"

"No, it's not me, don't talk nonsense..."

Liu Wanxi twisted slightly, her cherry lips brushed against his cheek, and she whispered like a mosquito: "Do you want to... play like this with Wanxi?"

Xue Mu's heart was pounding, and he coughed to cover it up: "Forget it, this is not good. Pan Jinlian is the one who plays like that..."

"When I treat you to drink half a cup of residual tea, am I not Pan Jinlian..." Liu Wanxi pursed her lips and smiled, without saying anything more, she just said: "Okay, I still have to deal with the memorial, and I will deal with Ji Qingyuan later. . We... have a long way to go."

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Liu Wanxi wants to do business, not only to deal with Ji Qingyuan, but also to learn how to handle government affairs. This is a big deal, not a time for joking.

Although Xue Mu was itchy by her explicit statement, he did not bother her anymore. He got up and went out, picked up Wei Ye, greeted Ye Guying, and ran to Xiao Qingwu's private courtyard in the palace, intending to teach her some serious ways to make amends.

Along the way, there were palace maids who led the way and took care of the children. It was like treating the inner palace as a back garden.

"Dad is so nasty."

"The leader is a pervert."

These were the words that the two girls kept saying over and over again along the way. They all turned into Mrs. Xianglin and chattered endlessly. There were no other new words. It seemed that they really didn't know how to describe it.

Xue Mu lowered his head and remained silent while being sprayed. It seemed that the grape rack article had offended everyone except Liu Wanxi. It was better to be honest and not resist when being sprayed, and to teach others some decency. This At least the image can be saved a little bit...

Xiao Qingwu's single courtyard residence has a great origin. It was Xiahou Di's residence in the palace. It is secluded and quiet, with several clusters of plum blossoms dotting the courtyard. The environment is very suitable for Xiao Qingwu's taste. There is also a palace maid who takes care of the food and daily life. If she follows her habits and doesn't go to treat Ji Qingyuan, she can stay there for the rest of her life.

Xue Mu came to visit, and the redness on Xiao Qingwu's face had not faded. She couldn't see Ye Guying, but when she saw Xue Mu and Wei Ye, she was not so frightened that she closed the door, but just bowed weakly: "Master..."

"Ahem, I didn't consider the essay just now and used too much force. I apologize to you."

Xiao Qingwu was stunned for a moment, then shook his head and said, "Master, this article is very good and I learned a lot."

Xue Mu was stunned: "What did you learn?"

"Scenes and actions, language and expression, all aspects can be combined together to make them vivid and vivid, instead of rigidly explaining what is in the heart. As for those things that are just appearances, Qingwu is learning the way of writing. , how to describe sexual intercourse and how to describe military affairs are actually the same."

Xue Mu stared at her blankly. He knew that the genius had already shown his talent. Even without him, Xue Mu, Xiao Qingwu would have shined brightly sooner or later.

He took a deep breath and said seriously: "Last time we talked about the three elements of a novel, let's talk about structure and foreshadowing today..."

As the director of an entertainment company, Xue Mu often gave some internal training lectures before time travel. He was no stranger to the job of guest teacher, but he had never been so serious about taking classes in both planes.