Ember Gun

  62 feedbacks

1. After writing for so long, I think there should be a feedback, so it is like the question.

2. I originally wanted to write a sense of... suspense, yes, the first half of the overall outline of the book is a flashback, a little bit of excavation of the events of the Holy Promenade, until the final announcement.

  3. But obviously this method is not suitable for online writing, so I changed it. Many foreshadowings have to wait a long time, but they are all in advance.

  4. But I still like to write a strange sense of suspense, let everyone guess each other.

  5. This is a very **** phenomenon. I write very cool, everyone reads very dumb, and think I am a silly critic.

  6. Of course, there are people who say that they are pretentious and foreshadowing too long.

  7. Difficult to reach.

8. There is no way people have to compromise with the market, so I try to control it as much as possible.

9. The protagonist is not a traverser. This is for everyone’s affirmation. Mainly, I think the world view of this book is more rigorous. It is a closed circle, so the setting of the traverser will not appear, the protagonist is real. Indigenous.

  10. In fact, this worldview is...bigger and more complicated than everyone thinks.

  11. There may be some plots of "hypocritical", "wenqing" and "smelling objects".

  12. In fact, many set vocabulary is not just a play stalk, it has its own role, but it has not been written, such as the name of the protagonist.

  13. In fact, I don't want to write anything complicated, but I can't help it.

  14. Because I have to read it several times when I write it, and when I send it out, the whole person is numb, and sometimes I can’t find the wrong words. That depends on you. Generally speaking, I will change it immediately.

  15. If you can't change it, the chapter is locked.

  16. I have to find an editor, but after I added the editor, I said two sentences in total.

  17. You may not believe it. After the submission of this book was approved, my last editor was transferred away. At that time... I felt very embarrassed.

  18. People sometimes don't understand the speculation about identity... In fact, this is for this effect, because the plot in the next volume is to name the identity.

  19. But obviously this way of writing is very deadly and goes against the mainstream.

  20. But I just can't control these hands.

twenty one. I am more envious of authors who have a fan base.

twenty two. Because it is a daily update of online articles, there is not much time for me to sculpt articles every day, not to mention that the book is mainly story-based, so it is inevitable that there are some chaotic rhythms.

twenty three. In terms of setting, everyone has said that there are many shadows of acg works, but in fact, most of the setting of this book is separated from the one in my womb. After changing the modern setting to the magical style, it becomes In this way, it feels pretty good.

twenty four. In fact, I still want to write the still-born book, and I complain about it.

  25. Maybe rewrite it in this book.

  26. I think Legend of Jianfeng is a good thing, everyone should check it out.

  27. In fact, there are no Cthulhu elements in this book. To be precise, some are Cthulhu's...thriller style?

  28. Isn't he fragrant to write something original?

  29. The main feeling is that if you write this inherent setting, you feel confined to the rules.

  30. Everyone has questions, in fact, there are explanations, but it is not yet time to make it clear.

  31. In fact, I have read book reviews. After all, some of the logical loopholes in the articles will not be noticed by myself. It is up to you all.

  33. Some strange settings are not explained, but in fact there are special plots in the later stage.

  34. The main reason is that I think it's too stupid to list the settings in dozens of chapters.

  35. To a certain extent, I think this kind of "mysterious and mysterious, without human words, the whole stream of consciousness" is more like Cthulhu's "indescribable" style.

  36. After all, now that the ancient gods are all over the land, and the people of the weak and weak boats are known to everyone, there is no sense of indescribable.

  37. Of course someone will say, "Happy, bad review."

  38. There is no way I can't control these hands.

  39. In fact, the cause of everything in this book is inspired by an scp project.

  40. It's not too much for the 25th and 5th boys who run through the Foundation to be downgraded to D-class.

  41. The recent plot feels a bit procrastinated, and the main new plot is added, and the insertion is a bit blunt.

  42. Some people say that there is a big gap between the styles of the first half and the second half of the book.

  43. It's mainly a personal habit. The beginning of the story is a fast-paced story, show what can be shown, and then tell the story slowly.

  44. This book is not entirely steampunk. It is at the crossroads of an era. Steam ends and electricity rises. After all, Tesla has come out.

  45. It’s no problem if you understand this book as a history of the development of a magical world of science and technology trees.

  46. From another perspective, this book is a science fiction story.

  47. Such as changing erosion to radiation?

  48. It's just a fantasy novel, don't delve into that much.

  49. (Actually, I want to write that kind of nasty object.)

  50. The current stable day is around 4500.

  51. In fact, the update of this book is mainly based on the rhythm of the plot. For example, if the plot is more important, it ends in a big chapter.

  52. I can't split 4500 into two, it's not human.

  53. Plus, it mainly depends on the rhythm of the plot.

  54. This is a cool article, a cool article I wrote myself.

  55. I would like to thank you readers, grandpa, although this book is still a rush, but at least it is fatter in the rush.

  56. To tell the truth, it's pretty awesome, and the books that were in the same period as me have basically been boiled to death.

  57. Yang Tian laughed.

  58. A lot of support, maybe with everyone's efforts, I will go to the game plot? Telling the truth about game art is not human.

  59. I am looking forward to a game factory recruiting screenwriters, give me a chance.

  60. Thanks again everyone.

  61. Boom boom boom.

  (End of this chapter)