Editing Backroom: My Inventory Scares the Backroom Entities

"Next, let's look at the first piece of information!"

This message was sent by Mackenzie Hugo, M.E.G.Omega Base to Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G. Alpha Base, in the hope that Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G.Alpha Base pass the Green Light for Level 9.1 "Impact Points" document. [

To: Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G.Alpha Base

] [From: Mackenzie Hugo, M.E.G.Omega Base

] [Title: Request for the Green Light to Pass Level 9.1 "Impact Point" Document

] [Date: 2022/05/17

] [Content:] [

Hi, Pol-Pol1,]

[After those strange places were smashed into pits, I wrote a brief introduction. [

There is really nothing to write about, so this one may be a bit short, but I think it is still necessary to upload it to the database, after all, it has caused such a big impact.] 【

I put the document in the attachment, do you have time to look at it twice?】 【

Thank you buddy.】

[From: Mackenzie Hugo, M.E.G. Omega Base]

"From this piece of information, it doesn't seem to be too much of a problem."

"According to the M.E.G. style, such archived documents will inevitably be green-lit and quickly archived."

"But the confusing thing is that Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G. Alpha didn't pass this request, so let's look at more details!"

[To: Mackenzie Hugo, M.E.G.Omega

base] [From: Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G.Alpha base

] [Title: Reply: Request the green light to pass the Level 9.1 "Impact Point" document

] [Date: 2022/05/17

] [Content:] [

Hello Mac,]

[I'm glad you can write a draft for this, most archivists are reluctant to prioritize this place, let alone volunteers; Of course, I also have to say that this is really not too necessary.

[In my own opinion, until we know more about this crater, there is no need to rush to document it.] 【

With the information we have now, you have indeed done your best.】

[However, allow me to raise some minor flaws here

:] [First of all, your grammar:]

["20 km wide" is a bit problematic, maybe you should write "about 20 km wide".

[The sentences "Further documentation is still ongoing" and "No one has seen any entity in Level 9.1 so far" should be preceded by a comma. [

Also, don't write documents in the second person.]

Now, we see the "Theory" section: I don't quite know where your Crimson Forest theory came from, it's not tenable at all.

[First, correlation is not equal to causation; There are many possible causes of impact craters.

Second, we discovered this crater several days before we lost contact with the Crimson Forest, so it can't be the site of the forest at all.

I know it can be hard to accept, and I understand your sadness, but it's not healthy to comfort yourself with such desperate theories.

This may be cruel, but it's exactly what you need to hear right now.

She's gone, Mac.

[Summary: wait for the results of further investigation of the crater, and then you can write another draft in a realistic manner.] 【

Thanks.】

[From: Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G. Alpha Base]

"I believe that when you see this, you can already find some clues."

From the information revealed in the words of Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G. Alpha, Level 9.1 "Crimson Forest" was not caused by a meteorite impact.

"Secondly, most of the M.E.G. Archivists are reluctant to deal with the events that occurred at Level 9.1, and we don't know if there is anything hidden in it, and in the words of Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G. Alpha, it seems to be avoiding the important and directing this matter in other directions."

"Now, let's take a look at the remaining records."

[To: Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G. Alpha

Base] [From: Mackenzie Hugo, M.E.G.Omega Base

] [Title: Reply: Reply: Request the green light to pass the Level 9.1 "Impact Point" document

] [Date: 2022/05/17

] [Content:] [

Can, at least, let's pretend that the Crimson Forest was crashed by a meteorite? 】

... Dividing line....

[To: Mackenzie Hugo, M.E.G.Omega

base] [From: Polyergus Brensford, M.E.G. Alpha base

] [Title: Reply: Reply: Reply: Request: Green light request for Level 9.1 "Impact Point" document

] [Date: 2022/05/17

] [Content:] [

No. "

Seeing this, I believe that many friends have a clearer understanding of how Level 9.1 disappeared."

"Why does the M.E.G. avoid the important and light, obviously they know that Level 9.1 did not disappear because of a meteorite impact, but why did the last archive file be a meteorite impact?"

"Most of the archivists are not willing to take over this, and at the same time, who is that 'she'? Why do you have to go out of your way to remind you when you mention Level 9.1 that 'she's gone'? "

Is Level 9.1 related to this 'she'?" What exactly is M.E.G. trying to hide at that level?

"So, is the disappearance of Level 9.1 - The Crimson Forest really just because of a meteorite impact?"

"Okay, that's it for today's video, we'll see you in the next issue

!!!!!..."

"Groove! And that's the end of the video?

"How can this UP Lord say half and don't continue!" I'm taking off my pants, just show me this thing?

"I can only say that your understanding is too poor, and the UP Lord has said everything, anyway, I understand."

"I can't imagine that there was such a thing in M.E.G...."

"666..."

“......"