An Ton's Journey

" Begin!! " Shouted twin headed announcer of the race.

"Oh. they are pretty fast " I said while looking at the screen.

" Not just fast, extremely fast " Shmi Replied to my surprise.

" And dangerous " She continued with worried face.

Ahh, i see. She is worried for Anakin. I forgot.

" Ooh raiders appeared and ... " Announcers talked on the background.

Hoh, I forgot that it was like that.

" Isn't it against the rules ?" I asked while thinking about doing something exciting if I could.

" Who would stop them? and there are no real prohibition on intervention. It only adds to the spiciness of the race" Shmi replied from her knowledge.

So, she is the only one willing to answer? or just the first one?

What a good woman.

" Huh, so I just could destroy everyone's rides? " I asked.

" Only if you didn't bet on anything in this race, If Hutt finds out that someone who bet used tactics like that... there will be a trouble " Shmi, as the most knowledgeable about this world answered, while Qui-gon finished the sentence.

" Oh!! this is good then! Oden, kill the raiders and get your friends to destroy all the vehicles of racers. Obviously without anyone dying. " I said while laughing in my mind.

" What? You can't do that! Hutts will not leave it be! " Shmi frantically said to Oden, who wanted to execute the order.

" Why would he? This is not against the rules! Ahahahaha" I laughed with ridiculous abandon.

" And I doubt they would be able to do anything to me, especially while I broke no rules of theirs" I replied.

" You, you, you can't! You will die and bring us down with you! " Shmi hysterically begged not to do this.

" Ahh, and here I wanted to have fun. Argh. Fine. " I said.

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" Oden, turn their rides off without destroying them. It Will be more fun AHAHA " I continued while imagining the faces of everyone while it just happened.

" As you wish, will be completed immediately " Oden replied and blinked out to do his work.

" Why would you do something like that? " Amidala asked while frowning.

" Do something, Qui-gon" she continued.

" Please, don't bring us into any trouble, An Ton. Stop this. We need this race to be completed. We are in a hurry " Qui-gon asked me, while looking at Amidala and then at me.

" No. " I replied While trying to make my voice as calm as possible. I really wanted to laugh.

"..." Everyone

"What? You expected for me to just comply like that? " I said in complete seriousness.

" And after they all stop, they could just begin again or continue as before. I will not stop them. " I continued, while watching how all riders just disappeared.

Now for the main course.

" Ohh! what is going on? Why fid Sebulba just stopped? Is he taunting others like that? " Announcers shouted and all the audience shouted in response with laughter.

" oh

Oh, what is going on? Why is everyone just stopped at the same place as Sebulba? What is going on?" Announcers continued to comment on to the situation.

Well they are good at making audience happy.

" Okay, Aden. tell them that they can let them continue when I order, just make them be ready" I said, and Aden just nodded and began ordering through his mind.

Useful stuff, sadly I can't do that. Or maybe not so sadly.

"How is this possible? There are no one out there " Amidala asked, While Qui-gon looked at us carefully.

"Oh it seems that Hutt's servants has gone to check what is going on!" Announcers Said while I looked at sleepy Hutt waking up and making angry face.

" Ok, make them release the riders the moment those servant get close, I don't really want to get in unnecessary trouble. For now." I said to Aden.

Ohh. You should've seen Hutt's face when all the pilots started at the same time when servants approached them. Kek.

Ok, I had my fun. let's see if Anakin will win even with changed situation.

Will the so called Plot work out the different situation.

Yes. it worked out. Anakin won.

and bȧrėly too. just like in original.

Well, not unexpected really.

As we were going down from our platform, Oden returned.

" Good job. Thank them for me. It was fun " I said to Oden.

Careful as usual, well, fine by me.

" Now, I think we should decide when You will come to us. " I said to Qui-gon.

" I have a mission, and after we gey to the Coruscant, I believe we will be able to solve this. " He replied.

" I see, so, are you going there right now? " I asked. Pretending to not know.

" Yes, after getting our winnings from Watto we will go to the ship. Will you allow for us to take Anakin with us? " Qui-gon replied.

" Why are you asking him this? ask Watto " Anakin said as we met him in the middle of the talk.

" Well, I bought you from Watto, so It is obvious for him to ask. " I replied to surprised Anakin.

" And yes, I could allow him to come with you, but my ship and me will go with you, So you would not just run away. " I answered

" You don't trust a Jedi? Amidala asked surprised.

" No! obviously no! Why would I trust him? Especially after he tried to brainwash Aden " I said partially frustrated at her naivety.

As we were riding to their ship and talking, I was told that Sith is coming.

And as I didn't care about plot anymore, I ordered for him to get captured after he attacks Qui-gon.

Force users, in my opinion had some kind of sixth sense that allowed them to perceive the future a little bit.

Especially in battle.

Well, like Zealots, actually. But better? maybe. More research needed.

To be honest, I am a little bit disappointed at what I saw from Qui-gon. Really easy to subdue.

~ Time where Maul and Qui-gon fight on Tatooine ~

Maul, with extremely epic swirl in the air, jumps down from his bike, doing several flips in the air and activating shining red light saber in a wide slash against Qui-gon.

Qui-gon, on the other hand activates his light saber and blocks Maul's slash while springing his legs a little bit.

Right after this initial clash, Maul activates his second blade and begins massive onslaught of hits with his saber.

As this transpires, all others ran to the ship and began lifting process.

As for me, Aden, and Oden, we decided to stay

and called for The ship to shoot down at the sith.

As Dart Maul pushes Qui-gon to our side, Qui-gon shouts at us: " What are you doing? run! "

Hooh, so he is not really that bad of a person, but his Brainwashing need to be fixed.

" Well, Aden, Oden. Help him before others get here " I said.

Aden activated his powers and flew up, as his powers pushed him from the surface a little bit. Lighting cracked a little bit around him, but rarely and really silently.

As for Oden, he activated his blades, restructured his armor to the fighting mode, where all his body is protected, and Rushed at Maul.

" Stop! you would die! " Qui-gon shouted at them, as he didn't see Aden flying yet. Only Oden rushing at Maul with some kind of energy weapon.

" You don't have time to worry about them " Said Maul with his epic voice. I will need him to teach me how to talk in voice like that.

Intimidating voice. I like it!

As Maul told this, he pushed on to the Qui-gon's saber with his and was overpowering him.

At that moment, Oden got close to Maul and Slashed at him.

That slash was blocked, and Maul used force to push Qui-gon away, again.

After that, he blocked piercing attack From Oden, and retaliated with overhead attack, that was easily blocked by Oden's second Blade.

As Qui-gon was pushed back, he finally saw Aden and was surprised.

" Who exactly are you? I don't feel any force from you. " he asked.

" We will talk about it later, Everything have its time and place " I replied, while enjoying watching the fight, and imagining eating popcorn in my head.

" Yes, right. " Qui-gon replied while getting a better grip at his saber and getting back at fight.

Buy it was not really required of him. Aden and Oden were brothers. They know each other better then anyone else. And they fought in many battles together, even though they were young.

As Aden joined on to the fight, he used concentrated psi lighting to shoot at the Maul.

even though Maul didn't know what was the attack, he still felt it and evaded it pretty easily.

After that, many Illusions of zealots and dark templars appeared one after another, swarming on to the poor Maul, who didn't expect anything like that.

After illusions began appearing, Oden retreated with abandon, what is happening?

" Qui-gon, you better leave that to me. And run away from them, as it will be dangerous out there " Aden said while he created all more and more illusions.

" Oh. yes, i see. I will back out " He replied, surprising me with this.

What even more surprising, is that ship is not Flying out.

Oh, wait.

They just got here with item to repair the ship.

oh. lol. Was it like that in the story?

doesn't matter.

As Qui-gon retreated enough, Aden Used Strong psi storm at the Maul, destroying all the illusions and forcing Maul to defend against it using force and light saber, not really succeeding, but resisting fir some time.

At that point, I realized that I didn't see Oden anymore.

And the moment Storm stopped, I saw that Maul stopped moving and turned his saver off.

After that, Oden appeared behind him with on blade on to his neck, and another hand on to the handle of the light saber.

How the heck did he do it? I don't really know.

As he lost, Maul was silent, Aden took away his saber and locked him using stasis crystal.

After couple of seconds, I saw our ship arriving to our position. They were kinda too slow. I expected that it will be needed to subdue Maul.

I didn't think that Maul would be so easy to capture.

" Could you leave him to us, Jedi, we need him to prove that Siths returned " Qui-gon asked, a little bit more politely, If I'm not wrong.

"We will keep him on our ship, and if needed we will lend him to you, but I will not gift him to you, he is our prisoner" I replied, as My ship opened it's door and Protoss brought Maul inside, securing him into physical cuffs for additional security.

" Who are they" Asked Obi-wan, while getting out of their ship.

" The.. " Qui-gon tried to answer, before I interrupted him.

" We are protoss, and I am Anton, this owner of this ship" I replied to him.

" You? A droid? " Obi-wan replied, on the verge of laughing.

" Yes, me. And you better be careful with your words, if you don't want my friends to make problems for you" I said, pointing at Aden and Oden.

" Obi-wan, calm down, they are friends. And don't think that droid can't own a ship. " Qui-gon said to Obi-wan.

" And we need to hurry, we need to report that Siths came back. " He continued, while moving in to the ship.

Well, I, with Anakin came with him on their Ship. I don't want to Cockblock Anakin.

Amidala is beautiful and I can understand him.

As only Qui-gon saw the whole fight, no one was really nervous around Aden or Oden, but seeing that we captured Sith, guards of the princess were very attentive around them.

As we all sat down in front of the table and their ship was being repaired, it was time for a talk.

" So, let me begin first, before you ask any questions " I said while preparing to tell him a little bit about us. Even though, mostly half truths.

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Thank you for reading, and enjoy if you can.

It was pretty hard trying to explain the fight. I hope it worked out at least a little bit.

Before, I planned to make force users stronger, but I decided against making them op, as it would make no sense in many situations.

And I might make some, or all, force users stronger, but not in everything.

As they would have their own strong points, and peaceful life making them less stressed about getting stronger.

And please, leave comments.. I like reading them.