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Chapter 47 Skills: Sublimation of Works!

Terminal Novel Network Headquarters.

Cen Xiuhui sat at her workstation after the morning meeting.

He looked at Zhu Xian's data on the screen in front of him with a serious face.

Zhu Xian was released yesterday.

Lu Yiming published four chapters in one breath.

Seeing that the number of subscriptions for the first chapter was only [-], Cen Xiuhui couldn't help but sigh and said, "Only [-]? I hope he can keep updating!"

Zhu Xian's writing style is indeed good.

But both the plot style and the rhythm are a bit unsuitable for the current Internet literary circle.

In her opinion, Lu Yiming wanted to achieve enlightenment at the end.

If you don't consider changing the plot style and rhythm, it will take a long time to accumulate fans.

However, the first order of [-] is also a pretty good result.

A screenshot of the data page will be taken soon.

I found Lu Yiming through the chat software and sent him.

And input text: "The first order result is not bad! Come on!"

at the same time.

Lu Yiming was looking at his data panel.

Secondary occupation (2): Internet novel writer (D level 10021/1000000)
拥有技能：幸运光环[被动]、天命[0/3]、菜就多练白银[1855/2000]、幸运掉落LV1、老鹰之手
Item backpack: Internet novel writer D-level gift bag, energy drink*4, lucky treasure chest LV1*88, European Emperor's Potion*3, lucky paper crane, parallel time and space literature extractor
"Fuck! Why is it 100 million!!"

He knew he had been upgraded yesterday.

But there were a lot of things and I didn’t have time to take a closer look.

The two took time to look at cars over the weekend and picked up an Oriental Peugeot 408 worth over RMB [-].

Yesterday morning, I went to complete the formalities with the people at the 4S store. In the afternoon, I was busy with live broadcasts. When I got home in the evening, I couldn't help but try an energy drink.

So the data panel is only a quick glance.

I thought upgrading only requires [-] subscriptions.

Only 100 million subscriptions can be upgraded, which directly stopped Lu Yiming from thinking about updating.

If it's [-], he can update forty chapters.

But 100 million.

He doesn't have a manuscript of four hundred chapters.

At this time, the edited message is sent.

After reading the content, he smiled and replied: "The results are pretty good! Thank you!"

Lu Yiming is quite content.

To put it bluntly, this novel is not his hard work. Whether his grades are poor or good has nothing to do with his coding machine, but he is still a little disappointed.

After all, this is a novel that has been rated platinum by the system.

At first, he thought he could become a platinum author with this book.

He looked at the energy drink in the item backpack.

A strange smile immediately appeared on his face.

"Hehehe~ This is good stuff! It's much more powerful than the blue pills. I hope I can take out more! Five bottles are really not enough!"

Although he knows about the effects of blue pills but has never experienced them personally, he can guarantee that the power of this energy drink will not be inferior to blue pills.

He just went to play CSGO like a normal person afterwards, while Fu Xiaoli slept until dawn.

Recall your own state after using it.

Lu Yiming couldn't help but sigh: "If this thing could be taken out, its ingredients analyzed and mass-produced, it would be easy for the world's richest man, right?"

He shook his head after speaking.

"No! If this thing could be mass-produced, World War III would probably be caused by it!"

Infinite physical strength!
And there are no side effects.

A cross-century product.

After scanning the items in the inventory, look at the D-level gift bag and activate it with your mind.

[Congratulations to the host for obtaining the sublimation of the exclusive skills of online novel writers. 】

Sublimation of works: The works obtained from the parallel time and space literary works extractor can be optimized to a certain extent.Look at the skill introduction.

Lu Yiming's eyes lit up.

Get the system from early October.

It has been more than two months.

From choosing a game anchor for the first deputy job to choosing an author for the second deputy job, the skills given by the system are basically beneficial to the selected deputy job.

At this moment, Lu Yiming somewhat understood why it was an auxiliary system.

The main function is an auxiliary.

At this time, Lu Yiming couldn't wait to use his new skills.

[Should "Zhu Xian" be optimized? 】

Zhu Xian Lu Yiming has read the full text carefully.

The overall feeling is that it is a very good novel.

But the shortcomings are also very obvious.

When he reads novels, he stays in his middle school years, and they may not be suitable for his current readers.

Moreover, he felt that the style of this book began to change from the moment he came down the mountain, which was in sharp contrast to the previous dozens of chapters.

From the beginning to the Qimai martial arts competition, the whole story is funny, funny, and funny again, especially the burning of fire sticks. He could laugh so hard that he couldn't wait to read it in one sitting.

There are several tear-jerking points: first, Baguio holds an umbrella for Zhang Xiaofan and dies; second, Gui Li pays homage to Baguio, and Gu Ying feels sorry for himself; third, Gui Li and Lu Xueqi reunite, looking at each other in silence; fourth, Tian Buyi's death.

Let him personally summarize this book "Zhu Xian". First of all, it is very well written in terms of emotions. The first 80 chapters can be given 10 points, the middle 80 chapters can be given 8 points, and the last 80 chapters feel a bit unfinished, so he can only give 6 points. , the overall rating is 8 points.

of course.

This is from the reader's perspective.

If he were the author, this book would only be worth reading while kneeling and looking up.
Thoughts began to retract.

Lu Yiming silently made sure in his heart.

【Ding! 】

[Zhu Xian optimization was successful! 】

The same process as before to obtain Zhu Xian.

The optimized Zhu Xian appeared directly in his mind.

It's currently nine o'clock in the morning.

Until [-]:[-] noon, he had been sorting out the differences between Zhu Xian after optimization and before optimization.

The most obvious change is the reduction in word count.

For example, the original text used [-] words to describe the fight against vampire bats at the entrance of the Blood Cave, but the system simply went over this plot in one stroke.

At the same time, it enriches the details of fighting with people and the depiction of the warming relationship between Zhang Xiaofan, Lu Xueqi, and Baguio.

The dragging side plots such as treasure hunting in the plot are weakened.

Some important characters in the play also gave them clear ending explanations.

See the end of Zhu Xian after optimization.

Zhang Xiaofan retired after his success and returned to Caomiao Village, and finally got together with Lu Xueqi; Xiaohuan joined hands with Zhouxian, Wild Dog Taoist, and Jin Ping'er to explore the world; Lin Jingyu finally became the leader of Qingyun Mountain; and Mo Youji, the last member of the clan, embarks on a journey to find the Albizia Bell.

Lu Yiming opened his eyes and murmured: "So Baguio still hasn't been resurrected?"

So much has been changed before.

Lu Yi thought that Baguio's ending would also change.

But it's not bad!

At least it's much more comfortable to watch than the original ending.

"Wait! Doesn't this mean I have to rewrite the text?"

Lu Yiming frowned slightly after reacting.

Zhu Xian has been updated with nearly 20 words, and at least half of it needs to be changed. This workload is not low.

Immediately look at the screen.

Above is the chat box with the editor.

After some thought, he made up his mind to revise the article. After all, the optimized Zhu Xian was more in line with the current Internet literary circle. Maybe the results would skyrocket after the revision.

(End of this chapter)